Reviews for Dismal
autobotlover chapter 8 . 11/7/2014
Sad, but so well done.
kaila09100 chapter 8 . 4/19/2011
O man this happen to my friend I wa crying when I read 7 and 8 cuz he did the same thing on the note he wrote be4 he died he told me to stay up kid and big brother loves u he always call me his lil brother even tho iam a girl lol he always new I was gay be4 I even td him he said I was a black ruka lol but n e way love the Story
iBallin chapter 8 . 7/7/2010
Woah that was crazy good..er I mean bad. I mean bad that you killed off Haruka but good as in plot-wise..lol but holy shit! I've read maybe two other tragedy stories but this one kind of got to me. I had a close friend who cut herself over her ex and it's just scary to read something so raw like this because it actually made sense..it was more realistic I guess. Man I'm depressed now.

Anyways like I said, great story. Last chapter though., it was kind of rushed in my opinion. I would of wanted more of a dramatic act from Michiru. I mean, I could imagine how the people around reacted but eh I'd rather read it from the author's pov. I don't think having Michi talking to Haruka after she died would of been the right direction though..kind of corny. But yeah more of Michi's suffering would of been great. I'm not Evil! It's just normal for a human being to be more 'hysterical' after seeing your lover/loved ones pass away. :)
CoOkiE86 chapter 8 . 7/17/2009
Wow! hat off to you! What a story, I was losing hope in finding a fic truly emotional, yours almost broke me in tears, I'm still fighting with the lump in my throat...I can only thank you for putting up so beautiful story, although quite sad...Anyway, take care and good luck
XxLucaxX chapter 8 . 6/8/2007
Hey, I have one word for you WOW! That really got me! It was so powerful! You should so make Michiru's side of the story! And maybe one more of Haruka's ghost!(Have you seen Ghost with Patric swayze? maybe like a scene where Haruka is watching Michi and then Michi starts talking out loud or something to Haruka I don't know just a suggestion) Only one thing in the letter maybe you should have said a little something about her past because the family could still feel it was their fault ya know? But still WOW! I seriously almost cried when I first read it and I don't cry. Please take into consideration of writing Michiru's side of the story! It would be interesting!
1LilStar chapter 1 . 7/24/2006
hey, i was a little scared to start this story even though you always have really amazing ones. mostly because almost all of you dean stories were ones that i really liked and couldn't wait until you had an update. but im glad i decided to read it and i hope this one is continued and finished...ja ne.
Kingdom Hearts 3D rocks chapter 8 . 6/24/2006
*cries* why did...you make...Haruka shoot...herself? Chapter...still...awesome...though. *faints from shock*
Kingdom Hearts 3D rocks chapter 7 . 6/24/2006
*is shocked* oh crap! She really shot herself!
pretend2besome1 chapter 8 . 6/24/2006
this is really good..it's so deep...I love it!
Amber chapter 8 . 6/23/2006
there i read it... it made me cry... how sad... it was REALLY REALLY good one of your best... and i like how they didnt just go off and be happy somewhere like all the other stories from everyone seem to write... its good to have a different type of ending ya kow... okay well i love ya call me

Michi
Angel2411 chapter 8 . 6/20/2006
aw this is why I don't like reading tragedy storys the always make me sad idk now wat to say good ending I always thought wat the letter said and now I know lolz great story made me very depress lolz
touya chapter 8 . 6/20/2006
cool! there was more to it. i was wondering what the letter wrote...

i was wondering why it didnt say complete yesterday... sad but cool!
Artist Of Akatsuki chapter 8 . 6/20/2006
*cries histariclly* Such a good and sad fic! Made me cry!T_T
TheWretchedOne chapter 8 . 6/20/2006
oh...my..god...
TwinBladeWarrior chapter 8 . 6/20/2006
i never called you crazy! i asked if you were ok mentally, not the same thing, im mean im crazy, possibly insane but its a good way to be (and more fun)

i liked the resolution, youre a mean author you know that? making us think that was the end

ill repeat what isa id before, make the next fic less depressed please
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