Reviews for A Son to Be Proud of
Dino-Rogue chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
This sounds more than nice. So sad, though... The grandaughter of B and V, the daughter of Trunks. Oh...

Aww, perhaps that's the amusement park where Vegeta took Trunks before...

Beautiful fic!
jessi chapter 1 . 8/17/2012
Great story, I really liked the idea!
bvprincess23 chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
I was listening to a sad song while I read this and I almost cried. ohh I love trunks... poor Sally... The humor parts were nice... a cemetery next to an amusement park.

I couldn't figure out who it was, I kept thinking that it was Trunks when I saw "gramps" but i wasn't sure.

great story... whaddya know, now I'm crying.

good job! that inscription made me so sad. everyne is proud of him... T_T! awsome story, definetley one of my favorites!
SerpentPoison chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
wow, I cried when I read the inscription on the tombstone. You kept everyone in character, very well done. I loved it!
dbzfan952 chapter 1 . 12/26/2007
At first I was confused as to who's POV this was, and then I thought that I was being kind of stupid. It was really good, and it made me kind of sad how at the end of the tombstone it said,

'A Son to Be Proud Of.' That makes me so sad... Oh well!
BlackRose96 chapter 1 . 7/17/2007
just out of curiosity, how was he supposed to die?

and you were right, that was a tear jerker.
LeximusPrime08 chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
that was super cute and sad. can you make the sequel, please?
Kimmy TurCha chapter 1 . 9/19/2006
ok i have tears in my eyes,*wipes away* *sniff* ok, whats with you making me cry huh? god. I loved it great fic, i was going back and forth between who 'gramps' was. I really did love it great work, i think ill go read more if you promise that i wont end up crying. hehe wishing you the best of luck on your work. Much Love -Turcha
callietitan chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
wat is it with u and making me cry! this is not fair... i've used all my kleenexes... this story is beautifully written, i luved it, even if it is a tear-jerker.
D4cHilliN chapter 1 . 8/16/2006
oh my god what a awesome story. i'm crying right the last part was so sad and sweet, i'm still crying ya know...sniff...poor Trunks.
Tilea chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
No way! I liked it. I'm trying not to cry. Great job, really. Poor Trunksy... Wonder how he died. Hm...

Well, I'll be working to update SOMETHING so everyone knows I'm not dead, and meanwhile you keep it up too.

-Tilea out...
callietitan chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
*sniff* that was so cute it made me cry! *sniff* i LUV this fic! *lower lip trembles* it was so sweet! and sad! no father should have to bury his son! *sniff* and, as a rare occurence in bittersweet fics like this (except 4 yours), Vegeta is completely in character. everyone was. *sniffsniff* u r an amazing author. *sigh* well i'm off to read something else with my good friend, a box of tissues! *runs off sobbing over the cuteness and sadness*
R chapter 1 . 6/21/2006

hey...just in time for father's day too. _
The General of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
aw...Sab!'ve...done it again! *bursts into tears* This was complete heart-wrenching, yet still excellent.

Roux: *holding an umbrella* I particularly liked the way you kept Vegeta in character...and how you fleshed out his granddaughter...

Once again, brill. oneshot my friend. Keep up the excellent work.

-Da General
Pearl3 chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
wow...i def think you should continue with this...i wanna see how she interacts with Vegeta and Bulma now!
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