Reviews for Adrift in a World |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The interactions between characters in this story are really cringe I hope it gets better over time |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! This is a really interesting story, I enjoyed reading very much. I am sad to read that you want to leave it, but I understand your reasons. Still, I would like to ask, if it isn't rude, could you summarize shortly how you thought this story would go on/end? That would be really great and give some closure. Of course, you don't have to do so if you don't want to. Peter being a good guy is an idea I haven't read before, but I love it. It's really great. You let people see why he was a Marauder. He is actually smart and a good guy at heart. And Sirius also being there for Harry is also great. Snarky and pranking Harry is really funny. And his sister Holly is very smart. I really liked her. Have a good time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Extremely strange. |
![]() ![]() ![]() harry is to passive... and forgiving against dumbels |
![]() ![]() ![]() You've done a splendid job with the characters. I'v never read such unlikable people in a long while. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why haven't you continued this? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve been re reading this for years, really hope you update it soon and complete it someday! |
![]() ![]() Rereading |
![]() ![]() ![]() WONDERFUL STORY! MORE PLEASE! THANK YOU FOR YOUR HARD WORK! |
![]() ![]() ![]() My friend and former crush once called me young grasshopper as well lol Glad to know it's considered an appropriate nickname by other as well |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very interesting and intriguing story. A brief synopsis of how it plays out would be wonderful! (Do they ditch the order? Join/take over the 3rd group? Pit all three against each other and take their chances with the next dimension? etc.) Thank you for writing this and posting it! L |
![]() ![]() ![]() At this point tags should include angst and drama. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You can't remove objects from the RoR that you imagined only things placed there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not really sure where this whole Ginny thing comes from. Also we have covered 6 chapters and maybe less than 48 hrs. It's trying a bit too hard to mix hammy comedy with dark ish world. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Been loving the finish. |