Reviews for Again |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Its been over decade since the last you updated. Is this story already discontinued or you already lost inspiration on this story |
![]() ![]() Why would he have a scare? If he came back in time in his younger body, then he should not have a scare. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please keep updating |
![]() ![]() Boring and generic.. Writing quality is also subpar. Dropped |
![]() ![]() ![]() hehe that is a hilarious spelling error "the window is censored" censor is bleeping out swear words. You wanted sensor-ed as in senses detecting. But considering what Sasuke wanted to do maybe censored is correct. |
![]() ![]() *10 years later* and this was good too. |
![]() ![]() 10 years have passed . .. |
![]() ![]() ![]() sometimes I want to yell at haku to shut up with how he makes anything sound sexual. but I find it to amusing to do so. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, so here's what i think. First off, you should avoid writing fight scenes, you're just better at character interaction. Second, where you truly failed is not giving us an accurate scale as to how powerful Naruto was. I mean, you said he was 23. In canon, a 23 year old Naruto could curb stomp Orochimaru and still have plenty of gas in the tank. Now can you understand my disappointment with your forest of death fight? Otherwise, this is a pretty good story. I think tagging it as a romance/adventure would've been more appropriate, but it is funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto and kyuubi couldn't have held the jutsu while he was in limbo our wherever. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why didn't Naruto's ears and tail come out? |
![]() ![]() ![]() One fight scene and basically the whole story is ruined. You had Naruto talking a big game about how he'd kill Orochimaru only to get beat down. Plus, no mid level snake summon could hurt kyuubi. He'd usage but straight through it. No cool jutsu out anything there. I honestly doubt the five element seal would've really worked with Naruto accessing that much demonic chakra. Hell, Orochimaru's hand would've likely sustained damage from the demonic chakra. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was lame. I've really enjoyed the story so far and you made Naruto sound pretty powerful. Then he just goes and gets punked by a snake summon and can't stop Orochimaru. This was a big thing he was trying to stop so i doubt he was just playing around. I can't believe that was so pathetic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just started reading this chapter and cracked up. It was like anchorman 2, when the guy was giving a eulogy at his own funeral. |
![]() ![]() ![]() First few days of D ranks and their already on Tazuna? I let quite a few things pass in this fic, including (but not limited to) basic phychology, but this is the one that broke all emerson I have mustered up to that point. Still a good fic, 5/10 on a personal level, but 8/10 over all, plus compliments. ;) |