|Reviews for Again|
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/30
Boring and generic.. Writing quality is also subpar. Dropped
| kaliaje chapter 28 . 3/9
hehe that is a hilarious spelling error "the window is censored" censor is bleeping out swear words. You wanted sensor-ed as in senses detecting. But considering what Sasuke wanted to do maybe censored is correct.
| Guest chapter 31 . 1/5
*10 years later*
and this was good too.
| God chapter 31 . 12/31/2020
10 years have passed . ..
| Fanfic9000 chapter 21 . 10/13/2020
sometimes I want to yell at haku to shut up with how he makes anything sound sexual. but I find it to amusing to do so.
| Luciendar chapter 24 . 8/25/2019
Okay, so here's what i think. First off, you should avoid writing fight scenes, you're just better at character interaction. Second, where you truly failed is not giving us an accurate scale as to how powerful Naruto was. I mean, you said he was 23. In canon, a 23 year old Naruto could curb stomp Orochimaru and still have plenty of gas in the tank. Now can you understand my disappointment with your forest of death fight?
Otherwise, this is a pretty good story. I think tagging it as a romance/adventure would've been more appropriate, but it is funny.
| Luciendar chapter 18 . 8/24/2019
Naruto and kyuubi couldn't have held the jutsu while he was in limbo our wherever.
| Luciendar chapter 17 . 8/24/2019
Why didn't Naruto's ears and tail come out?
| Luciendar chapter 15 . 8/24/2019
One fight scene and basically the whole story is ruined. You had Naruto talking a big game about how he'd kill Orochimaru only to get beat down. Plus, no mid level snake summon could hurt kyuubi. He'd usage but straight through it.
No cool jutsu out anything there. I honestly doubt the five element seal would've really worked with Naruto accessing that much demonic chakra. Hell, Orochimaru's hand would've likely sustained damage from the demonic chakra.
| Luciendar chapter 14 . 8/24/2019
This was lame. I've really enjoyed the story so far and you made Naruto sound pretty powerful. Then he just goes and gets punked by a snake summon and can't stop Orochimaru. This was a big thing he was trying to stop so i doubt he was just playing around. I can't believe that was so pathetic.
| Luciendar chapter 7 . 8/24/2019
I just started reading this chapter and cracked up. It was like anchorman 2, when the guy was giving a eulogy at his own funeral.
| Zeta Grey chapter 5 . 8/20/2019
First few days of D ranks and their already on Tazuna? I let quite a few things pass in this fic, including (but not limited to) basic phychology, but this is the one that broke all emerson I have mustered up to that point.
Still a good fic, 5/10 on a personal level, but 8/10 over all, plus compliments. ;)
| Kid ku ka chapter 18 . 3/20/2019
After reading -after seeing Naruto's naked ass that is...-
I only have one thing to type. What the F-AQUA
(F word Aqua) my way of saying the f word ;)
| Monster King chapter 31 . 11/15/2018
Great work please continue it
| Tempest S chapter 17 . 10/13/2018
Why would he even know what a scar from a chidori looks like? To scar, the person would have to survive so it healed and Kakashi would have to fight them again and see the exact spot they were hit before.