Reviews for heart break and an old secert |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Loved your story. Thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Emmett jumping in and proposing was so funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great! |
![]() ![]() this was a amazing story and i love it |
![]() ![]() why she open her eyes |
![]() ![]() ithink that she should hav the same as the braking dawn but with more control over it and be able to do more with it ps. i love your story;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved your story! It was really good! |
![]() ![]() wow i almost cried |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Truly amazing can't wait for the sequel! |
![]() ![]() Edward did the wrong thing for the right reason by leaving, but, honestly Bella can be such a tool in some these fanfics. Where is her loyalty to Edward and the Cullens. She believed some vampire(Nikolai)she had just met over Edward. He practically had to prove that Nikolai was lying to her by showing her the note. ("he didn't seem to be the type for revenge") How would she know? She had just met him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I just love love love this WHOLE story! You need to write more just like this and help me out! I love the twist and how Bella turns into a vampire! It's a great story |
![]() ![]() omg its the awesomest endin ever ur a great author like it was briliant i cant believe its over im so gona read the sequel its the best book( well eexept for the twilight books) iv read in 13 years of my whole life! you are awesome! please keep writing this cool stuff u could be the next stephenie mere |
![]() ![]() hey it awesome this story |
![]() ![]() i lov how sonnys better at them in poker an hes nine u writ gr8t stories ..wel chapters so please keep writng |
![]() ![]() umm mabye bella could make people move like mess with the arms legs body? or hurt somebody using only her finger! |