|Reviews for Gypsy Eye, Wolf Eye|
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/11
Please continue this! It's fascinating!
| 2AddersFanged chapter 5 . 1/27
Thanks to everyone who still takes the time to review this story of mine; I know it's been eons since I submitted the latest chapter. I'd actually written an ending a few years back; but unfortunately my computer crashed and wiped out my hard drive before I could post it. I do remember what's going to happen, though; so someday soon I may get around to re-writing and posting it.
Dorin, if Chapter 5 is your idea of porn, you're entitled to your opinion. I'd have to disagree, not that there's anything wrong with fan fiction that reads like porn (own your sexuality, people, own it!). To me, though, "porn" would involve a lot more emphasis on the blow-by-blow (!) physicality of humping, and a lot less wallowing in Frollo's enticing emotional angst. But that's just moi, and possibly fodder for yet another story.
As I said in my story intro, my incarnation of Esmeralda is based more on Merimee's Carmen than on Hugo's Esmeralda. Why? To amuse myself. Merimee's Carmen, described as a "thief-prostitute-witch", was a criminal, brazen and unrepentant, and not above using sex as commerce when it benefited her. Hey, I may emphasize that aspect in a new story about Frollo and my version of Esmeralda, since it'd be fun to watch Frollo scrape up the cash to purchase Esmeralda's favors, then watch him try to negotiate a good price. Frollo, haggling.
And maybe that story wouldn't be your favorite in the fandom, Dorin. But such is life.
| NotProcrastinating chapter 11 . 1/23
Dang, this story is so darn mmmhmgkmmmm. Cute. And romantic. It made me feel all giddy and fuzzy reading this with Frollo's desperate lust for Esmeralda, and her teasing him in return. Huehuehue. I really hope they end up together D; I enjoyed this story so much, thank you for writing this! I hope you have the time to update this soon! I hope you have a great day! :)
| Dorin chapter 5 . 11/17/2015
Eww, it sounds like some kind of porno scene...
Esmeralda wasn't a whore, she would never behave with a man like in that story..
She was very naive, and did not know anything about the differences between man and woman...ect.
| VampPhan chapter 11 . 9/25/2012
Loved this. Your Esmeralda reminds me a bit of Katherine (from the Vampire Diaries) especially with the whole toying with two brothers part. Huge fan of Jehan, so I'm glad you put him in here. It was FANTASTIC.
| MyahLyah chapter 11 . 2/5/2012
I honestly believe that Esmeralda have developed some feeling for Claude, but that's the hopeless romantic side of me talking. She should be tired of struggling in a life as a gypsy and marry Claude...she'd definitely make a very scandalous noblewoman to say the least.
| Tarah Draconiger chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
LOL very nice o.O
| troesnaja chapter 10 . 7/29/2011
Haha the old priest evidently bit off more then he could chew. Like before htough I like manipulating gypsy but I hope she still has some kindness left...
| troesnaja chapter 9 . 7/29/2011
Yes yes yes I like this a lot the wimp Jehan got what he desirved and the priest as well for kidnapping her... I hope the gypsy isnt all evil though, i hope she will eventually get together with quasimodo. I hope the priest tells her about the engagement of her former soldier lover... that should prove itneresting, i wonder what her revenge will be like...
| troesnaja chapter 7 . 7/29/2011
oooh interesting I wonder if either Claude or Quasi will kill jehan. I dont have much sympathy for him. I hope in the end quasimodo will save the girl though.
| troesnaja chapter 5 . 7/29/2011
Interesting! I htought he was being a bit tooo wimpy in the beginning but then he probbably has never had a woman before. The gypsy is cool though! I never liked most women in 19th century novels like christine in the phantom of the opera for example... too meek and stupid by half. Clever men like these need better opponents and I am happy you provide.
| troesnaja chapter 4 . 7/29/2011
Hi, I like this story, i liked zingara too but i like a bit saner Claude and a bit stronger gypsy, this should be interesting.
| Beckoning.Disaster chapter 11 . 2/6/2011
Exquisite. Simply exquisite. You have a gift with words.
| thunderings chapter 2 . 8/13/2009
Still utterly amazing. The thought of Frollo *giggling* is just so...GUH. So cute. Can't wait to see if Frollo's plan truly works.
| thunderings chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
The premise to this story is amazing. I always have wondered what the story would've been like if Esmeralda had a backbone. I can't tell you how many times while trying to read the book that I nearly just threw it across the room, totally ticked off at her. Needless to say, I'm not her biggest fan. Can't wait to read more.