Please please please make more this is so cute.

Awe, that's cute. There were many missing parenthases (and for the record, it's "samurai", like "sheep" or "deer") but for the most part it sounded like RuroKen.

testing something... please ignore :)

This is ok, I guess. I think it would have been better if there wasn't any author notes inside the story.

aw so sweet, you did a good job with yahiko and kenshin together. dad, and son cool, sort of.

It was really cute Gave me what I needed. I love it.

that was very cute.

i see you've managed to upload a fanfic? Yay! i'm just glad my instructions weren't confusing...hopefully...anyways, good job on your fic, i thought it was so cute!

I think it's good to show Kenshin as a father figure to Yahiko. Indeed, that's how I've always seen him. He kinda sees Yahiko as his adopted son. We see this more after the Kyoto Arc ends. Kenshin and Yahiko's relationship deepens into more of a father/son relationship.

My only criticism is it's generally not a good idea to inject author's notes into the story, as it disrupts the flow.

Aw...how cute! I love it! You did a good job of staying in character! Tears were starting to form in my eyes at the cuteness! I love Kenshin/Yahiko fics where they are like father/son! A job well done I must say! Continue writing!