Reviews for Into Dust
angel313 chapter 5 . 9/16/2012
Ah. That was cute. Thank u
SlytherinIceFaery chapter 5 . 4/23/2012
That was sad but it was so sweet too :( :)
Srienia chapter 5 . 3/27/2012
It was such a good story, especially the entire kitchen scene, both with Don sucking the blood away for a tad too long and how safe Charlie felt in his arms later.

It was a great hurt comfort story. It is too bad that you don't write for this account anymore
Cutter12 chapter 5 . 2/26/2012
The trauma and suffering Don and Charlie went through seemed real as was the love and tenderness that followed.
Evil-Snow-Bear chapter 5 . 5/11/2011



...Sniff...Sniff...That was... awesomely brilliant! This story is brilliant and I actally cheered when Don beat the bad guy up! 'Cos Charlie is adorable and I want a Charlie just so he could teach me maths XD

I would have commented on all the chapters but then they were all brilliant so I though I'd write a long review because it was that good... I'm so favouriting it!
Pampers Baby Dry chapter 5 . 6/28/2008
aw...poor charlie, it was cute and emotional!
Musicrocksssss chapter 5 . 3/30/2008
sequal plz
SaintFable chapter 5 . 1/20/2008
Oh, I-I think you're curing my black heart. It's so sweet! More!
B.A.D.Child chapter 5 . 10/29/2007
O fluffy incest love it yah happy endings
little dumpling chapter 5 . 10/22/2007
*sighs* ahh, how cute -. i quite like the ending, very adorable. keep up the writing! i would love to see more from you! -
Peya Luna chapter 5 . 9/9/2007
wow. poor charlie..but what a sweet ending!
schizofragile chapter 5 . 8/11/2007
Even if it was short, I loved it. Don and Charlie look so n ice together; you portrayed them very well, and the emotions of your characters could be felt. I would suggest to check your fragments and tenses through.

Please write more Don/Charlie; you are a good writer.
The-Spirit-of-a-Child chapter 5 . 1/3/2007
Very nice
SprohmC chapter 5 . 12/9/2006
Oh, this was very well written!

I don't think tha first chapters fits with the last, I mean, I think it feels like they comes from different fics, but that just made it better, haha...

It was a perfect ending, by the way _

Love, Cadoan
The Silent Rumble chapter 2 . 7/10/2006
It's getting better... but ya need tow atch the commas
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