|Reviews for All for One|
| Kesshi Uzumaki chapter 24 . 11/22
| Leah Reid Whitlock chapter 4 . 11/3
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! THIS CANNOT BE HAPPENING!
| bimokent chapter 1 . 10/25
that's one long name
| Like A Pro chapter 24 . 9/6
Too bad it was ToT
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/11
Don't the yamanaka clan have there mind transfer jutsu bloodline? Because you said they had no bloodline.
| Dragon of Yin and Yang chapter 24 . 6/12
| dedleguy369 chapter 24 . 5/18
Update please... Story is awesome... One of my fav's.
| Darkmikoangel12 chapter 9 . 3/26
I didn't wanna flame I really didn't but this story is so confusing! First it started off great but like only the first two chapters. I starts to get really unbearable when you first say he was in the academy then the next chapter you say he still has three years to go before he attends the academy. That is one of the biggest issue I have. then all of the characters are waaaaaayyyyy too far off from their personalities. Another thing is that you rushed too much. You should of just used Time skips and flashbacks. Even more so if you wanted to make Naruto get his harem faster. I think you kinda forgot this is a NINJA story so child warriors are common. And it is alright to have a relationship at the age of 12-13 especially now a days. I like the idea of the bloodlines and the story but to me you just need to work on your timing and events in this story and future stories because you also left out many details that every Naruto FanFiction has. I understand if you don't like what I have to say but please understand I like to read a lot and I've read many great Naruto stories that range from short to extremely long. Plz don't take offence.
| arinasution5 chapter 7 . 3/17
| Lisanna Ackerman chapter 6 . 2/20
Ummmm,is it just me or your spelling for the two names is wrong? The correct spelling are Fugaku and Sakumo
| penea2 chapter 5 . 2/20
ohoho orichimaru what are you doing here
| penea2 chapter 4 . 2/20
Gasp! sealed! I like this story so far though, unique premise, instead of one bloodline, just give him all the fucking bloodlines!
| imnotraven16 chapter 24 . 2/18
so I guess this is abandoned.
| SamaDaVinci chapter 1 . 1/22
Omg his names kills me..reminds me of Picasso who had 26 middle names
| IllogicalMind chapter 8 . 1/21
Hahaha Poor Iruka XDXDXDXD