|Reviews for One|
| Walleyandkuki chapter 1 . 11/14/2011
Awww! So adorable!
| dat-ass-doe chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
3... so cute! nice job, love it!
| American Anaconda chapter 1 . 12/12/2010
Amazing. :D I think my favorite is Overwhelmed. Lol, I want to draw all of these, but it would take too long... But do you mind if I do choose a few to draw? I have a deviantArt account, and my username is the same as on FanFiction, but I would give vredit and link back to this. :D
| Highqueen Julietta chapter 1 . 6/24/2009
wow very B-M-ish...
| AkitoTsubaki chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
Having played Benvolio as Mercutio's bitch, this pairing will always have a special place in my heart. It's quite amazing how much one sentence can convey, if you do it right. :3
| Weak-chan chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
I have never, in my entire life, thought of this pairing, much less the idea of finding a slash on it!
You are incredibly creative to think of this, to be sure!
Also, your style is very cute and endearing.
Great job! D
| Liem chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
Benvolio and Mercutio make such a sweet couple. D All these sentences are really great; you did a good job.
| YukiHasAMercedes chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
“Put out the light,” Benvolio whispers against Mercutio’s neck, his breathing hitched, and Mercutio mutely complies.
HOSNAP that definitely just turned me on.
| Zolo chapter 1 . 7/25/2006
That was beautiful, really beautiful.
| Amanita Jackson chapter 1 . 7/10/2006
aw...thats so pretty...im going to be in a happy fluffy mood for the rest of the day now...thank you.
| ShayaCatalyst chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
where does everyone find these challenges? i feel left out *pouts* ive never found or written for a single challenge, are they hiding from me? great fic, by the way.
| Figure chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
One-sentence fics aren't pointless tripe, C. Clerk. They don't have to be novels, and although the challenge is not to provide artless decoration, I /do/ want to read beautiful writing. So what if they "sound pretty" and don't give you any insight into the soul? I think a clear picture is painted here. It's a challenge to convey an idea, one that I think the author managed pretty effectively.
Nice piece. Sweet writing. _
| Sora Miyara chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
Special but beautiful O.O I love it *favs*
| hyenateeth chapter 1 . 6/15/2006
That was so cute! Very romantic and fluffy!
| C. Clerk chapter 1 . 6/14/2006
I hate the one-sentence challenge, that literary farce. It inspires so many people to write things that they think are pretty without really needing anything concrete to ground them.
It's so disjointed that I'd have to take out all the completely random words in between and make it into prose to review it properly.