Reviews for Diary of an Orphan
acompletenerd chapter 48 . 3/4
I just wanted to say I loved your story. Thank you for writing and sharing it.
silly93 chapter 47 . 9/11/2014
I loved it that was soooo cool :-)
DalkonCledwin chapter 1 . 9/8/2014
"Who am I? You sure you wanna know? The story of my life is not for the feint of heart." Yeah you totally snagged that from Peter Parker didn't you? Still it fits the characters of the Harry Potter Universe way way better than it does that super-powered Pansy. Truthfully though Peter Parker would totally wreck Voldemort. Between Peter's Spidey-Senses allowing him to avoid the Killing Curse like it was a slow moving nerf missile, and his webslingers pinning Voldemort to the ground or wall, there really isn't anything Voldemort could do against that guy.

But still nice use of the line.

Tala... you named her Mum... Tala... okay.

Slight nitpick, Sirius Black, despite his last name, actually has brown hair. I would also like to kindly point out that Jenna as the daughter of Sirius Black would likely have been the Goddaughter of Andromeda and Ted Tonks, and as such would have been raised by them, not in an orphanage.
Guest chapter 12 . 8/6/2014
So you excused Harry hitting a girl?
Guest chapter 9 . 6/2/2014
Your writing is quite good. However, so far I feel like Jenna has had no impact on the original story and she seems quite useless
Guest chapter 48 . 1/6/2014
Such a good book, cried, laughed and thoroughly enjoyed it! Thank you so much xxxx
Guest chapter 26 . 11/2/2013
Sirius is the best character
webbj chapter 47 . 10/4/2013
This was a wonderful story and I could not stop reading it! Your OC character was awesome, and the relationships you had develop throughout was great. I do not have enough words to express how much I enjoyed this story, and will probably re-read it again because it was so good. Thank you for your wonderful creativity and imagination!
elijahlover chapter 26 . 9/8/2013
I HATE YOU HOW COULD U SIRIUS DIDN'T HAVE TO DIE WOT WAS THE POINT! I DON'T EVEN KNOW IF I WANT TO READ THIS ANYMORE I LOVED IT BUT THEN U HAD TO GO AND RUIN IT BY KILLING SIRIUS MY FAVERITE CHARECTER! WHY COULDN'T JENNA HAVE SAVED HIM!
elijahlover chapter 19 . 9/7/2013
DON'T KILL SIRIUS NOOOOOOO PLZ DON'T!
elijahlover chapter 9 . 9/7/2013
YES YES YES now its time for the prisoner of azcaban I can't wait! xx
peenislover chapter 48 . 6/7/2013
Hey! Just wanted to say I absolutely loved this story! I've always wanted to see if Harry would fall for someone else because I personally did not like Ginny very much! The first few years were a little slow because it felt like Jenna was just tagging along, but in the rest of them she became her own person! It was amazing thanks for writing and I'm off to read the sequel!
topcat2001 chapter 48 . 4/22/2013
A Name you could use is The Life Beyond The Diary
Ariauna chapter 48 . 3/13/2013
love it
Guest chapter 4 . 2/23/2013
This is Shit you can't write.
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