|Reviews for Diary of an Orphan (original writing)|
| AllISeeAreStars chapter 8 . 3/9
It really bothers me that she isn't telling them about her hearing it too.
| MyNameIsMordecai chapter 38 . 1/11
Excuse me... But didn't james and lily potter die at age 21? I think you had a typo because you put age 31 as their death age xP I just thought you'd like the correction pointed out
so far, Im loving the story tho!
| HRHPrincessTricia chapter 2 . 12/4/2016
I'm having serious issues believing she has vivid, coherent memories from when she was a month old. Even Harry at a year and a change only had vague impressions of the night his parents died. It feels like a bit of a stretch.
Maybe this is meant to be a story she's telling, but it doesn't come off like that.
| HRHPrincessTricia chapter 1 . 12/4/2016
Those first few sentences are giving me Spider-Man with Tobey Maguire, circa 2002 flashbacks.
| Str.0314 chapter 46 . 2/14/2016
SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEUQEL and when Jenna passed out when brewing the potion I screamed out loud btw lol
| Str.0314 chapter 15 . 2/7/2016
This story is perfection
| Str.0314 chapter 9 . 2/6/2016
This story is perfect! *favorites*
| Face Yourself chapter 3 . 9/21/2015
Interesting so far, but I'm really bugged by the whole "can't afford it" nonsense with the school - compulsory education in Britain is free.
| K.Daniels chapter 47 . 8/12/2015
I friggen loved this story. I even loved the OOC-ness of some of the characters. I reallllllyyyy loved the parents and Lupin coming back! I just really loved it all!
| tsiddiqaamin chapter 47 . 7/16/2015
Hey readers! If you enjoyed this story check out mine, it's called The Never Girl, taking inspiration from this fanfic it's about Sirius's daughter befriending the trio.
| Guest chapter 43 . 7/11/2015
She leaves to have a normal life, returns as a student to play some pranks... when you deviate from the plot your imagination is a little lacking
| Guest chapter 33 . 7/11/2015
The characterization of Hermione is such an honest portrayal. I know it may be down to the fact it's predominantly Jo's writing but well done nonetheless.
| tsiddiqaamin chapter 17 . 7/11/2015
As a feramorph shouldn't she be able to understand the egg? Or don't merpeople count? Could she heal using her phoenix tears? Really inspiring ability.
| tsiddiqaamin chapter 6 . 7/11/2015
I hope this isn't going to simply be a re-enactment of the golden trio's adventures with Jenna standing over them. Difficult to be constructive with the amount taken from the original at the moment.
| Guest chapter 13 . 7/11/2015
I love the the story so far!However, I must admit I am becoming furious at Jenna. Why is she not angry at Harry?! I would be! She even thanked him! He hit her and said awful things! Make him squirm a bit! Is she not going into how her father attacked her twice as well?!She is too soft for someone so stubborn!