Reviews for War in Germany
Blairx6661 chapter 3 . 4/16/2014
This was really good! :)

PleasantPotterDoctor chapter 3 . 8/2/2010
Best Bend It Like Beckham fanfic I've read:)
Pink Lady Alex chapter 3 . 2/11/2010
I love the title of this story! I have to say, this is is really, really good. You've been able to capture the thoughts and feelings of each character perfectly. I love being able to get each of their viewpoints on the situation. Well done!
Lady of the Deep chapter 3 . 9/27/2008
i like seeing the different people's perspective of that night, it was interesting. good job.


Claire is The Lady Of The Deep
NM chapter 1 . 10/24/2007
Woohoo! Finally, a Joe/Jess fic! It's a good story, altho a bit short. One thing, though, that I was wondering about... Would Joe REALLY be so... Sentimental? I dunno, I just don't think so... whatever... KEEP RITING NORMALISHLY AWESOME STORIES! yay! (sry... I'm in theatre and cheerleading... I some times get a bit *Cheery and Dramatic* as my sis calls it)

Good Luck!

Nupur Maheshwari
Sabrina chapter 3 . 11/12/2006
Fantastic story; you really captured each character's voice and pov. I especially liked the details you added for each character, such as Joe's worry about how this incident would affect the team and his realization that coaching is instinctive for him. Along the same lines, Jules' realization that her mother would have liked her and Joe together, compared to Jess' family's reaction. And Jess' worry and sense of freedom were just right. Hope you write more stories in this fandom.
Keikolilo chapter 3 . 9/25/2006
I really like your fanfic "War in Germany". The different point of views over one incident made it unique. I liked Jules' PoV the best... Well done! _
SEADragon1588 chapter 3 . 9/13/2006
I always like these "what are thwy thinking" fics. Yours is especilly good the way you were able to squeeze a lot of emotion in so little space.
Pauline chapter 3 . 9/11/2006
I especially like Jules PoV, seems very real espec when she'e shaking with both anger and heartache.
Airia Black chapter 3 . 9/1/2006
m. tres bien. i enjoyed the diologue that went through the characters heads.
snow1685 chapter 3 . 9/1/2006
Good characterisation, well thought out and convincing. Good Job :)
ta1nt3d1uv chapter 3 . 8/13/2006
Very good. I liked it. :-)
24isthebest chapter 3 . 7/19/2006
Aww I feel bad for Jules. I like how you illustrated that Jess' parents would be furious at Jess for bringing home Joe while her mother would be estatic. LOL life and love aren't always fair.

Is there any way for you to extend it? I really like your writing! :)
24isthebest chapter 2 . 7/19/2006
I like how Jess is totally confused about the kiss. And scared. After all, liking someone that much out of your culture is hard, especially with parents like Jess.

Great chapter! :)
24isthebest chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
Please tell me you are going to update soon!

I want to see the different perspectives! :)
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