|Reviews for Portrait of a Soldier|
| Coco-Minu chapter 1 . 11/20/2007
Excellent picteresque description, nice job.
| Midnightally chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
Awsome poem. I just love it so much.
| Never-everland chapter 1 . 7/12/2006
hm intesting i hav to agree with you on the from godess she morphs into angel of death thingy cool ...one thing when you say "the most docile curve,
And then the most bitter stare.
The goddess Athena,etc.."
you could hav just left out "and" theres no need for it but hey its till good
| Tsuyu no Inochi chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
Very apt description of our prosthetic avenger. A definite cybernetic Athena.
| VoodooPriestess chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
wow! really describes motoko well...good job!
| qirien chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
Wow, this really makes me think of the 1st season intro! Good imagery.
| Taishu Tsukitai chapter 1 . 6/15/2006
Quite nice! I love the buildup from talkign solely about the shell to moving slowly into a deeper, incomprehensible meaning before BAM! We're hit with that beautifully-placed 'Ghost of a soul' line and it wraps it all up.
The style wasn't my favorite, really; sentence variation was minimal, and so many similes in one poem led to losing actual focus, or even reality, and made the more poptent Metaphors a tad blunter, instead of the flowing, undetectable things that they are usually designed to be.
All in all, not bad at all! I hope it got an A!