Reviews for Harry Potter and the Lost Demon
Dave210 chapter 53 . 3h ago
Whole story review - What an incredible story! Very different key element from anything else in the well over 100 HP stories that I have read here. The writing was started before the pain and frustration that is Deathly Hallows was released in book form so practically nothing of what happens there happens here. Yet this story takes the often horribly written horcrux plot device to a much deeper and more significant level that JKR and most other writers here do.

This has immediately become one of my favorite HP stories here. It is rated M for good reasons, yet none of them are gratuitous. I can only hope that more people find HP and the Lost Demon and read it.
corwyn chapter 53 . 2/21
i really loved this story. thank you for sharing it!
Guest chapter 53 . 12/27/2014
A super story to read over the Christmas holidays.
Thank you.
DylanL chapter 6 . 12/24/2014
I'm having trouble understanding how the oota family is still around if the oni is the father of every child BC the female can't have children after his child, also wat happened to all the others
Guest chapter 1 . 12/3/2014
Mary Sue's unite!
SpIdErbite20 chapter 53 . 11/8/2014
Loved it.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/14/2014
Mary Sue's unite!
Bob-Just-Bob chapter 2 . 9/28/2014
Take that Mister Lead Character. hehe
Lord Of All Fanfiction chapter 2 . 9/21/2014
Diannika chapter 44 . 7/9/2014
poor poor pig
ridiculous129 chapter 16 . 5/20/2014
I think Hermione saying she loved Harry so soon was a waste and kind of broke their relationship a little and a bit anti-climatic, anyway, I'm also starting to get a bit iffy about Kotone, is she going to be stuck on Harry's side the entire story?
ridiculous129 chapter 15 . 5/19/2014
Yes! I can't wait to see how they bust Ginny's irritating ass, and Kotome is sweet, I hope they can transfigure her to look normal. Anyway I've realized I don't like how Hermione's love for Harry was revealed, it was a bit too easy and basic, oh well, still a great story
ridiculous129 chapter 14 . 5/19/2014
Action packed chapter, though I feel all the deaths are being reacted to unrealistically, i mean they're kids! and it looks like Hermione is turning to the darkside of magic, is she? I hope so, and I hope Harry follows suit, they can't let these death eaters get away with killing kids, its about time Harry puts some work in after he's been making everyone wipe his ass the entire story :P
ridiculous129 chapter 13 . 5/19/2014
Hmm the story is becoming a bit cliche, I really don't like the way Harry reacts to certain things, like how he played a part in the attack on St Mungos and didn't care much at all, how he didn't have a reaction in Tonks being injured, how he hurt Hermione's feelings AGAIN, I feel that he doesn't deserve her, err, this story is great, but I hope you fix these problems.

As deep as the story is, there are many plot holes being revealed, but I guess that comes with the territory :) I'm still enjoying the read though.
ridiculous129 chapter 12 . 5/19/2014
The Ron and Luna scene was adorable, great job, you plucked both of them right out of the books heheh, I really like your portrayal of Ron.
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