|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Lost Demon|
| omh666 chapter 53 . 5/27/2013
Awesome work. Thanks for the great read.
| grinningshade chapter 34 . 5/26/2013
oh never mind forget what I said ... Voldemorts the true bitch
| kyoshi711 chapter 16 . 5/15/2013
You know that the average novel is 50,000 words. Yours is over 300,000 which tends to make this story very long and boring. Also 110 killed in the hospital and we have Harry firing stunners.
| kyoshi711 chapter 14 . 5/15/2013
'all the killing by the Death Eaters and you have the heroes using stunners. Why not cap pistols or water pistols. I sometimes think authors who let their characters use stunners are actually stupid or very young.
If this keeps happening every Death Eater is going to recruit more as their is nothing to fear from Harry and Hermione.
| kyoshi711 chapter 5 . 5/14/2013
Soon as Tonks used a stunner I realized that this story was written by a naive storyteller. These stories I classify as PG6 made for little children. Simple thought "kill or be killed."
| HarryHEARTHermione chapter 53 . 5/4/2013
This story was perfection. I'm sorry if I wasn't able to leave a review per chapter but its just so good that I can't stop myself to read. Thank you for writing this. Its better than I expected. This is a masterpiece. :)
| HarryHEARTHermione chapter 47 . 5/4/2013
Glad that Pig get his rest. he deserved it and how sweet of the senior pets namely Hedwig and Crookshanks to take care of Pig while he is almost knocked out. And to think almost all my review was about Pig. Hahahahahah
| HarryHEARTHermione chapter 44 . 5/2/2013
What did the poor little owl did to you. I know he is a little but exaggerated in the book and the movie but he is just a bird with wings that get tired. I feel sorry for pig. XD
| HarryHEARTHermione chapter 43 . 5/2/2013
Poor pig... Hahaha
| HarryHEARTHermione chapter 39 . 5/2/2013
Poor pig... what does he done to you and you're so cruel to him. Luckily, he get some sense of stopping on a safe place while waiting for the apparitioning of the receiver of the letter to stop. Haha
| HarryHEARTHermione chapter 36 . 5/2/2013
Oooohhhh.. I loved it. Parseltongue be damned. That was sooo cool hahaha
| HarryHEARTHermione chapter 34 . 5/1/2013
Ooooh.. You're so evil.. I've been waiting for hhr moments and you're an just killed the . Anyway, I'm sorry if I didn't leave reviews in every chapter. I get really tired now or lazier than ever. Haha. But to tell you the truth, I love reading your story. Its just an amazing plot plus amazing additional characters. The two prisoners and kotone are very much loved. :)
| HMSPumpkinPie chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
This fic. Oh my god. I can say with no doubt that this would have been better than the abomination that is The Deathly Hallows.
| HarryHEARTHermione chapter 7 . 4/27/2013
I like Kotone even with her appearance like that. She's so fragile yet she protected Harry.
| HarryHEARTHermione chapter 6 . 4/27/2013
Too confusing at first that I didn't leave a review. But now little by little I understood what is happening. Okay maybe one eight of the idea.. Hahaha. So I'm off to read for a while..