Reviews for Fated
riparian chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Absolutely exquisite. I loved that sense of inevitability, that sense of fate, that pushed them together. And when they were together, it was hot hot hot! I completely loved this fic. Hoping you'll write more in the future, though j realize it has even quite a while since you wrote this one.
voodoodollie chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
whew. That was simply breathtaking! ive read this fic probabaly around 10 times and i never get tired of it. You are an excellent writer and your characterization fits their characters in the movie so well. PLease write more!
Deleting123456 chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
this is so good i wish the king arthur movie went like this
Sunshine and Chocolate chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
This is very beautiful! Well written and captured the characters perfectly!
dapixam-q chapter 1 . 9/1/2008
Awe, it hurts so good. Also hot. :) Very well done, thank you for writing!
crimsonshadoe chapter 1 . 9/11/2007
*lets out a breath*

That was wonderfully, wonderfully written. I love the sense of inevitability and fate permeating the story, making it more than just about two people in love. Your style of writing suited it so well too, and created such strong images for me throughout the story. Your characterisation of Lancelot and Guinevere and Arthur, and especially the conversation between them was just great.

One thing - I found a typo that I thougth I should point out. In the sentence: "Her gate was smooth, gliding, but predatory." - gate should be "gait" in this context. But that didn't detract at all from how much I enjoyed this story!

Wonderful work - it was an absolute pleasure to read, and I only wish it had gone on for longer.

xxxTrojan-Princessxxx chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
That was very good. Excellently written. I love how you played out the characters.

Keep up the amazing work!
Lilian Jay chapter 1 . 6/23/2007


i admire your writing skills.

the way you are able

to find the proper words

and string them together

to to fit the setting

and era of your story

is amazing.

please do not hesitate

to write more.
hellishlygood chapter 1 . 2/19/2007
OH MY DAYS! THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING MY EYES ACTUALLY FOGGED AT HOW HOT IT WAS. you write so sensually and the deepness to your writing is intriguing. you manage to take such a simple plot and make it so incredibly deep. please continue i beg thee!
ezridax19 chapter 1 . 10/30/2006
Exquisitely beautiful story. Your writing is simply fantastic. I always preferred Lancelot and Guinevere together. This is by far one of the best fics I have ever read. You are an extremely talented writer. The dialogue especially is superb!

I especially like this line: “Arthur is not a stupid man, Guinevere. He remembers, as I do, how easily your arrows find their mark. A man is somewhat more difficult to kill than a deer, yet we’ve seen you kill many men, and to date, no deer.”

I do hope you write more Lancelot/Guinevere fiction :)
digiblue00 chapter 1 . 9/6/2006
This was such a lovely fic, i always wanted Lancelot to be with Guinevere and you've made my dream come true! You did a great job with this fic and i hope you can continue it, or if not please write more you have a beautiful style of writing. Keep it up! :)
leo-sol chapter 1 . 8/7/2006
Incredible. You are an absolutely superb writer. Your prose is poetic, your grammar exquisite, your details breath-taking and your characters vivid. I have but one complaint: Why deny us more? I have never read a finer story than this one, and I thank you so much for sharing your true talents with us all.
Bunny's confidant chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
This was a very good read. You are a talented writer and I would really like to see more of your work. Please let me know if you should decide to continue this story or do a follow-up. Two thumbs up! _.
Mar.xoxo chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
Wow. This was excellent. You captured the mood just brilliantly. And with, er, quite a bit of detail too! haha. Truly a great story!
somewhereiusetobelong-inactive chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
I liked this story, it showed different sides of... well, you know what I mean.

Anyway I think that you really captured the emotions of the characters.