Reviews for Cross the Line
Damned Lolita chapter 3 . 2/5/2008

See the consequences of gossip, Kimiko? -laughs- Poor Omi... god, someone needs to talk with this kid...
Damned Lolita chapter 1 . 2/5/2008
I really don't know what to say except the idea of Jack in drag is...interesting...

Sheesh, Chase. -laughs-
tanithlipsky chapter 3 . 10/16/2007
JeiJei chapter 3 . 7/16/2007
hilarious, absolutely hilarious. And the part about the potato tentacle monster waiting to violate him...god, it cracked me up.

And turned me on. Sorta.

*twisted grin*
JenKristo chapter 3 . 1/19/2007
write more! write more!
JenKristo chapter 2 . 1/19/2007
chocolate frosted jack! I love you!
JenKristo chapter 1 . 1/19/2007
OH MY GOD. No one could have pulled off jack as a maid better than you dod. that whole first chapter was orgasmic!
Shadir chapter 3 . 1/11/2007
Your fic is very enjoy _
breenarose chapter 3 . 12/28/2006
Hm, interesting, keep going.
Fire.Rose.Black chapter 3 . 12/10/2006
Wow. This story is love. L-o-v-e love. Gah...the charicterization is brilliant, the dialogue hilarious, the list goes on and on. I love this story to the point of obsession. I think the way you portray the different characters is very IC and just beautiful. Jack is adorable in his cuteness, his being scared of Chase and yet still a fanboy of him, his being so proud of himself for finding the Wu first, etc. I think the idea of Chase having Jack as his weakness but not letting Jack know, of course, is just perfect (and cute). You did veyr well with all the monks plus Dojo and their personalities. I can really imagine them saying all the stuff that you had them say. Continue soon!


Necro Girl chapter 3 . 12/5/2006
I lke where this is headed, u may need a few more details but the dialog and story plot is enough to distract, i give ya a 8/10 *FAVE* *ALERT*
Rambie chapter 3 . 11/5/2006
Snrk xD Niice.
Voltra the Lively chapter 3 . 11/4/2006
Rumors, bleh. Hate em. But, unlike them, this is awesome!
Mill chapter 3 . 10/9/2006
Fwe! I've never actually looked forward to what Omi would say next XD

Write more, please!
ShisouEimin chapter 3 . 10/6/2006
Congratulations! You've managed to put a grin on my face that'll probably never go away! XD

Poor little omi, i always feel sorry for him when he's confused, even though i don't like him...
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