Reviews for The Legend of Heroes: Tears of a Mew Mew
TheNew959 chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
Katselfrein chapter 1 . 4/4/2008
For not knowing the storyline offhand, it's pretty good, though a medieval tube top? xD

Ah makes me want to find my game disc again...too bad it doesn't work on Vista, only for WIN98 D:
Kyelor chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
Watch your tenses! Sometimes you go back and forth between present and past tense with your verbs.

In the beginning, you mentioned that four of the Mew Mews are knocked unconscious, yet they are standing up and looking around, which contradicts the meaning of being 'unconscious.' It would probably make more sense if you omit the 'knocked unconscious' part.

But, no worries! I noticed that you wrote this a long time ago, and you're probably a lot better with this sort of stuff now! There aren't many Legend of Heroes fics around, so if you do decide to update, good luck!
Kite Lanford chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
You know, your fic is motivating me to grab a PSP so I can get the Legend of Heroes: Tears of Vermillion. It is out in english by Bandai, so play though it to check it out.