Reviews for The flames within
SPG inc chapter 1 . 4/25/2007
Story's okay, but your grammer is absolutely appalling
Neji-Hinata chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
That was cool and interesting, even though I didnt know what was going because I havent played that game in a long time! TTYL!
Dart the Pirate chapter 1 . 6/20/2006
Gunnar I am not reading this
atth99 chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
this is good gunnar but u need to seperate all the words or actually the words ppl are sayin by spaces nd say whos all talkin i got a lil confused. but over all it was good.