Reviews for The Chinese Immigrant
Juunnachi chapter 12 . 7/9/2013
Ssooo love this!
xBitterSweetDreamsx chapter 12 . 3/4/2013
I like the story but there some part of me that wishes that it didn't end with a wedding, maybe because most epilogue are wedding related.
Azreal7313 chapter 12 . 7/8/2011
I love this story! Though, I was surprised by The Dewei Yuki pairing, but better than ending up alone and bitter. And thank you for putting up the Epilouge!
Annatole chapter 11 . 2/25/2011
Hehe, yatta. It's funny, the Hyuga family is always there when you need them... when Neji does something fluffy!
Annatole chapter 2 . 2/25/2011
Neji's POV was so sad! I almost cried! It's just so ironic that she left as soon as he had the strength to talk to her! Awesome job!
LyraMusica chapter 12 . 2/15/2011
HOLY CRAP! YOU WERE ONLY 11 WHEN YOU WRITE THIS STORY? I'm fourteen and I don't even think that my writing is as good as yours. I'm guessing that you're seventeen now. LOL.

Anyways, on with the review!

This was such an amazing story and what a great idea to write about :) I loved the description and emotion. The ending was especially perfect as well and loved the side couples too (especially Naruhina).

I'm so favoriting this! Great job!
ferbfletcherlover chapter 12 . 8/28/2010
love it 3

to the max!hhhahaha
GaaraSakura101 chapter 12 . 6/10/2010
When I first read the title for this story i thought 'well this is gonna be stupid!' but then after the first chapter, i loved it! then i finishjed the story and REALLY hoped that there was a book two!
Alquawende chapter 12 . 1/2/2010
This was a nice story to read. I really felt sorry for Tenten and admire her perseverance. I was quite happy to read that she lost in her fight against Yuki because in the other fanfiction she is in, she always wins. It gets cliche and annoying that the heroine always triumphs. I like that Yuki received her happy ending too. Never would have initially thought she'd be with the prince. Though this story had many angsty and sad moments, it was fun to read. Thanks for writing! By the way, there are spelling errors in a lot of the chapters. You might want to correct them. They don't take away from the story though.
Shubhs chapter 12 . 11/28/2009
LOVE the story!It was CHO KYOOT!XP XD XD - **
axsce chapter 5 . 5/18/2009
You're only 11? Wow, I'm 12 and you're writing's good! :)

I love Neji/Ten Ten now, even if I don't really like Ten Ten that much.

Sometimes I can barely understand the dialogue, but other than that job well down so far. I still didn't finish but I will soon! Love your story!
Seria KE chapter 12 . 4/11/2009
I laughed, cried, screamed and gasped through out this whole story. This was the biggest emotional rollercoaster that a fanfiction has ever sent me on. :) I love the deitail in this story... and you wrote it at age 11? Holy Shniskies! You are an amazing author and you should concider writing your own novel... get it published and you would become famous in like a WEEK! This also had the cutest ending. At al of the suspencefull parts i thought i would rip my hair out and then when there were *fluffy* parts I would constantly squeal. You were able to connect me to Tenten and Neji's relationship so well... I have yet to find a nother fanfitcion story that did that to me. You could level up to Stephanie Meyer if you wanted to and worked hard enough... you probably might even be able to surpass her. Keep writing and don't give up because you have a volcano of potential here! Thank you for writing such a wonderful story!
tennisxdork chapter 12 . 7/9/2008

very nice story for nejiten, i liked it :D

it's packed with oodles of adorableness and love [:

good job -high fives-

much love!
tennisxdork chapter 11 . 7/9/2008
tian-tian is so frikkin adorable. :D

-throws confetti-

alright tenten hyuga for teh win! they have tons of babies ;o

ahaha xD
tennisxdork chapter 10 . 7/9/2008

okay i'm done...:x


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