|Reviews for Cancel English version|
| LopezV97 chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
Aww! I really love this! I personally think being able to translate your work to English is a talent all on its own, good job.;)
| Gabi chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
hahaha! Pauvre type! Cet inconnu ne sortira jamais avec Riza... tant mieux pour nous (ben oui, on préfère rudement la voir sortir avec le plus beau des colonels!)
Juste une question... pourquoi avoir écrit cette fiction en anglais?
| Crystal Jaganshi chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
That's so cute!
| lorinett chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
Hehe C'est radical ! :D
| 11am chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
That was interesting. I love it!
| Anne Packrat chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
Not bad. You might want to pad it out more with some more description. Does French use the brackets to indicate dialogue? I never knew that. In English we generally use double quotation marks to indicate dialogue instead.
| me loves sanzo chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
whoa! Mustang's real brave!
| KTRose chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
Wow! This is superb! Short and sweet. I really don't have much else to say, but that I adored the ending. Hopefully the manga will have something like that! At least the kiss! Oh well... Please write more! French or English- It doesn't matter, but I don't speak or read French, but I can tell you have talent!
| dontbreakme chapter 1 . 6/16/2006
That's cute! You messed up a few times, but it was still easy to read. Good job!