Why is the author constantly mixing up 'other' and 'over'. They are totally different words.

So again retardation...
The mighty Shadow with more energy than a 4 Hataks gets destroyed by 1 Hatak LOL
Applause is in order for idiotic plot hole.
Also, Hataks have no "weaker rear shielding", they have omnidirectional shielding.

Okay, this is retarded.
First says planet where Ernest was is 3 years away from Earth. Which is impossible. There is no Sun System in that distance.
Shadow power source is enough for 4 Hataks LOL But previously it was hard to fight Alkesh ROFL
Also Shadow takes 3 days to reach planet 3 L years away. Lightspeed366. Hatak light speed is 32,000...
Of course, let not mention how 9,5 years old speaks like 30 years old. Ya simply can't reach that level in 2,5 year... Eh, whatever.

please update!

Omg. Please please come back and update this Amazing story soon

Shame it looks like this story is abandoned vel maybe you will continue it in the future. I really loved it.

Sad that it has not updated I enjoyed this so much.

go to google images and type in stargate Atlantis weapon platform you will find it there

I remember reading this back when you were still updating it. Sad that it’s been left aside for so long. It was gearing up so well, too.

Yours would take decades, if not longer.
Milky Way Diameter: 105,700 light years
Sure.. if you meant 10,000 decades.

I'm not liking the odds of an update occurring, judging by the rest of your page.
Unfortunate. It's a pretty good story.

My biggest, and really only, complaints surround the timeline: A lot of your canon timelines are wayyy off. E.g. Destiny set out less than a million years prior to canon.
As has been your continuity as a result.
Canon, for both, would've put HP at 15/16 when Stargate (1994) takes place in 1996. SG1 kicks off a year later.
In chapter 2 you stated that HP was 7 yrs, months before Stargate takes place. That would put his birthday in 1988/89. In Ch 34 you state he's born in 1980 as per HP canon.

Him being a child for a lot of difficult events has merit. Him being one to screw with the SGC has merit. But you ruined your own timeline and continuity to do so.

I'd offer criticism and suggest alternatives utilizing your timeline, but short of this being rewritten, they're pointless.

It is a good story, and I understand it's FanFiction, but contradicting yourself confuses us readers.

One day I hope you return to this story. The galaxy you've built is fantastic.
Until then, many blessings upon you.

Is it just me misremembering or are your dates off from canon Stargate by a few million years occasionally?

I don’t understand what really happened, he had a stunner ready to “turn people off” but then he shoots a lethal weapons instead?

did we ever get to the ancient ancient in the arctic ice?

they could have been loyal to him :p but good chap!