Reviews for Fighting the Gods |
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![]() ![]() ![]() they could have been loyal to him :p but good chap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story. It's one of the best crossovers. Please update again. Cant wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() the last part sounded like a start to a very bad incest-ic gay relationship... but thats just me. love the astari but harry gotta get another ship like the constellation as a backup. |
![]() ![]() ![]() NOOO! MY BABY! Why did you HAVE to destroy his ship... I loved that ship. Now he only has a small ship for everything since the big one is not complete... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait you said that it was 10 times the size of the constellation so wouldn't it be longer than 4 miles. And wouldn't it have been cooler if the constellation could dock inside the new bigger ship. Hmm and description was a bit confusing. I srsly cannot imagine what it looks like without thinking of food tins and salmon cans! It would have been cooler if it looked like the super star destroyer from SW or something. A ship that we can search for on the net for an image would have been better. I am imagining that the constellation looks like thor's ship... |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great story here so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you write more of this soon. If you do decide to make pairings have Harry/Kel be with a male and if you decide to bring in SG Atlantis or Universe then Have kel/Harry pair up with John Shepard. Keep up the great stories. |
![]() ![]() I have to admit I love the story you have interwove the stories tremendously I love it I'm just sad that you haven't written anything on it in like four years now what do you do apart to a different title and kept on I haven't gone to your page yet but that's my next top thank you for writing this I hope you continue to store your you pick up the story again |
![]() ![]() ![]() A few Goa'uld Ha'tak's firing on a 3-ZPM powered Alteran ship wouldn't bring the shields down to 90% with a few shots. They wouldn't be able to bring the shields below 99.99% even with a sustained bombardment. And what's with the rough hyperspace transitions? Asgard and Alteran ships have inertial dampeners strong enough for smooth transitions. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lots of inconsistencies. Pretty sure you said the space station Harry uses was built after they returned from Atlantis, but in this chapter you say they built it before. Also, dates are all screwed up. Atlantis was built 30 million years ago, and sent to Pegasus 7 million years ago. And they seeded life on Earth and throughout the galaxy before they left, not after they returned. And they returned 10,000 years ago. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Radio messages would travel at the speed of light, which would take 50,000-100,000 years to cross the milky way from earth, not years. And why is his ship only flying through hyperspace at 1 light year per day? It can clearly go much faster than that. Not to mention the closest star system to earth is over 4 light years away. Teal'c claims in SG-1 that hataks go 10 times the speed of light, but they really go at least 32,000 times the speed of light, and Harry's ship should be several times faster than that. They should be back at Earth in minutes. In other words, your numbers suck. But your story is intriguing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i find it to boring, and disorganised. a lot of harrys plans dont make sence all in all i dont really like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() kel'al is to strange a name to use on earth so he uses kel cause that is so much better then harry |
![]() ![]() ![]() use your power properly, yeah that is why he was locked up for 3 weeks |
![]() ![]() ![]() an advanced society that has mages, but apparating isnt one of their skills. so far its al a bit half done |