Reviews for Fighting the Gods |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really good story why haven't you finished it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another bull shit story... You realise that the go’auld ships are incredibly slow the chase would not have realistically happened. |
![]() ![]() ![]() An interesting story it is sad to see it abandoned. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story, I need more though! please, please, please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Distanceses in space: The milkyway is about a 100000 light years across. Three ly will only get you to one of our neighbour stars. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ummm you wrote quite clearly that the clone was only having magical powers, as it's sole purpose was to be a decoy, masking Harrys disappearance, now you are suddenly rearranging it all. If you want more alterans, there are several ships of them, no need to create more by cloning... Let Harry be the main character as you meant it from the start. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sucks this and the other stories are dead I really enjoyed them |
![]() ![]() Just a thought, but those who have been giving you a lot of "stick" may be referring to AN of chapter-33. |
![]() ![]() One of my biggest peaves is seeing Harry save people that MEAN HIM HARM. Sure, SG-1 is good people, but after the repeated attacks on his person by people feom Earth would make a rational person cut his losses. You are leveraging a stupid "save Earth" agenda that is frankly idiotic from any rational perspective. What have earthlings ever done but made him suffer. The next point that peeves me of is the child soldier business. What sane individual ANYWHERE sends a prepubescent brat to fight and kill? Harry was foolish in canon and Dumbledore... He was scum of the worst kind. And SG1 just accepts this? My biggest issue with this? It is seeing him repeatedly placed under the mercy of an enemy through ridiculous plot bullcrap. If you want him to be conveniently helpless to advance your (stupid) agenda, then dont train him. You have created a plot with so many holes in it that i just cant read any further. |
![]() ![]() Dick move, that ending. I don't want to see that again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good! I'm favoriting this, and I look forward to more in the future, should you choose to continue it... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do I need to mention that even if your could travel one light year a day it's would still take your three years to get the the closest star other than the sun to earth? FTL only works if you can go hundreds or thousands of times the speed of light. I'm favoriting this. |
![]() ![]() Thanks for writing a story where everything doesn't go right for the main character. |
![]() ![]() Sniper Harry swag |
![]() ![]() Alien harry i lone it |