|Reviews for Pack Up The Moon and Dismantle The Sun|
| Ahyah chapter 1 . 11/19/2015
I felt for Storm. That last line... *sighs*
| Jamielen chapter 1 . 3/15/2012
I so love this story! Storm and Jean are one of my
favorite pairings but there is hardly any slash for them :,(
| lilbit1016 chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
amazing story loved it
| magicmumu chapter 1 . 10/26/2009
This story is so sad. I could feel the guilt of how Storm must have felt she didn't take as good of care of her as Jean had of Storm. Great short story. I like this pairing.
| Ashley chapter 1 . 8/30/2009
I loved loved LOVED, that. The Boo-Boo part was by far my favorite. But it was sweet simplicity. Thanks for sharing. )
| firelarc chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
wow thst is o bittersweetly touching. Poor storm. Such a wonderful duo of characters. Vey well writen and was a pleasure to read
| Rain Addict CM chapter 1 . 2/6/2008
that was sad, but very well written, thank you for giving me the chance to read that._
~Smells like Rain...
| 89 chapter 1 . 10/15/2006
that is so gross
they are not gay
| DeMoKa chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
aw! poor Storm! man. that was soo sweet and so angsty sad! *sniff*
| depressionkills chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
Aww that's so sad..sniffle..very emotional..