Reviews for A Lovely Night
Raven chapter 1 . 9/4
Nice job, but maybe elaborate and have some more action and maybe have the Prince come into the story and there is a fight. Just suggestions. Good job.
SeriousBookLover chapter 1 . 5/27
The beginning was great, but the sex is kind of grossing me out. No offence but, but I just skimmed the thing through.
A ANIME FAN chapter 1 . 4/26
I loved this story is really good. And kinda cute, even though is a lemon.
randomchinchilla chapter 1 . 3/26
coolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll story tho.
berry chapter 1 . 11/25/2015
That was great
Guest chapter 1 . 11/25/2015
That was xxx girls
DA PROBOSCI chapter 1 . 7/16/2015
Nice fanfic ! There were a few technical errors, but it was well done in general ! We hope that you'll continue to write fanfiction for this couple !
Howl Sophie chapter 1 . 6/26/2015
Horrible... They'd never talk like that... Their actions are belov the level of their charecters...
Guest chapter 1 . 5/16/2015
omg chapter 1 . 4/6/2015
it was nice...
Grell is Queen chapter 1 . 2/5/2015
Soo great \\\\\\ loved it keep writing your really good!
crzykittyfangirl chapter 1 . 12/18/2014
very nice, i love these two!
animelover chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
Omg this was awesome, I mean it cuz I practically glued my eyes to the words. What would happen if the prince came?
Megumi S chapter 1 . 2/22/2014
Okay first to start off with I had some mixed feelings with this story although it was good and I understand you watched the Miyazaki movie I still can't stand seeing "Markle" as Michael's name... Your lemon for being a first timer was pretty well written, the sex was a little wishy washy and the characters were a tad out of it but that was expected, no offence. I laughed when you mentioned your mum and said that you were embarrassed at first but as you kept writing got over it, I sighed and said out loud " d there goes this child's innocence...straight out the window." Well enough drawl from me keep on writing and keep on hiding these things from mum XD
unicorncourt chapter 1 . 2/15/2014
This is absolutely amazing! I'd be lying if I said I didn't come close to a nosebleed..
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