|Reviews for Phantoms of Azarath|
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/14
Get on with it already it’s been 9 years.
| Guest chapter 2 . 8/8/2015
I think that for the final chapter/act you should make it so the titans make it back to their home, the tower and they find trigon taking over the earth and raven is floating next to him by his throne, eyes white and unresponding while trigon harnesses her power to help him rule the earth. Maybe they call all the titans together to help them defeat trigon then free raven. Or they can find a way to free raven then she helps them defeat trigon. I just hope you finish this act soon as I cant wait to read it. This is one of the best thing I have read related to teen titans.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/16/2015
Soooooooooooooooooooooooooo awesome. I loved it. Please write the next chapter soon. I will be checking
| Nocturne in A Minor chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
Hi there! Started reading Chapter 1 about 10 minutes ago, realised this was really, REALLY good, and immediately decided to check whether it was completed or not. My heart just about broke when I saw that it wasn't. TT_TT
I know it's been a long while, and longer still since you last updated your profile. Since then, nothing... and you don't have any links to a blog or anything which might give some sort of idea as to this story.
In any event, if and when you read this, I just want to let you know that there are people out here who still love this pairing, and who love good-quality writing, and would absolutely, completely, totally LOVE if you would update this story.
Wherever you are, take care and all the best!
| DarkShadow chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
This history is amazing!
It have a good description of the facts, that occurs in long the plot.
Sorry for the grammatical's mistakes.
But, please..continue the history.
| Talitha the Little Girl chapter 1 . 9/24/2009
I've been wanting to add this story to my favorites for a while! :D
(Pst - when I have time, I'll properly review Act 2, and how are you coming along on Act 3?)
| Tali chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
I was reading this again - I haven't done so in over a year - and I just realized something:
"A flash, a tremor, but Raven didn’t say anything. She stood there, watching, smirking, dead inside like everything around her. Starfire called out, found herself ignored. She struggled against chains, prayed to X’Hal that Raven wasn’t so lost, watched as Raven floated down, down… level with her face and still smiling. The empath, what was left of her, took the Tamaranean’s chin in hand, pulled her close, hissed a threat.
A flash, a cry, and Raven grimaced. She fell farther, while Starfire of Tamaran emerged. The alien breathed hard, free, exhausted, glowing with unmeasured power. The clouds parted, and she saw Raven. The sound of water filled her ears, then nothing at all.
A flash, a whisper…
I’m so sorry.
...that's the part where Starfire killed Raven, isn't it! :D
| RoseXxxXThorn chapter 2 . 2/7/2009
THIS. STORY. IS. AMAZING.
More than amazing! ITS JUST SO AWESOME!
You must, must, MUST update! I don't think I can wait!
Keep up the fantastical work! I'll be keeping a look out for the next chapter!
| Alphawolf69 chapter 2 . 10/14/2008
I have to agree that this story is, indeed, epic *smiles*
The amount of thought and effort you've clearly put into this has more than paid off -it's not everyday I read such an interesting and well-written story (that you've included 'The Hollowmen' in this story is pretty cool, it suited Raven's situation nicely).
I also liked how you described Azarath, as well as the Teen Titans' reactions to it (Hot Spot made me laugh -all the Teen Titans' interactions flowed really well and felt natural btw, the bickering especially *grins*). Starfire's development over the chapter was intriguing and I'm hoping that her new-found powers will be enough to restore Raven to her normal state...
Looking forward to reading the next chapter, in what, 2010? *grins*
Seriously though, I'm looking forward to reading it whenever it's ready.
| Ohagi-chan chapter 2 . 7/16/2008
Ha, you're right! This is practically a saga... XD
I just wanted to comment on how brilliant your transitions and foreshadowing play out throughout the story. I don't feel as though anything was rushed or completely out of place... Although, I do have a curious guess as to where the next part of the story may take place, but who really knows? :D Please continue! Until next time! - Ohagi-chan
| D chapter 2 . 7/3/2008
Amazing. Purely, simply, wonderfully perfect.
Please take less than two years to update. I don't think I could live without finishing this story.
| Rain Addict CM chapter 2 . 6/11/2008
that was fricken AWESOME! damn that was brilliant to give Starfire Raven's powers! and Raven's mom is pretty damn cool_. i have no idea what i think really lol except that this story is awesome! i really really really hope you are able to update soon! because i have gotta know whats gonna happen next! and i am sorry my review is so puny in comparison to the greatness of this story so far...but the story left my mind in aw...
~Smells like Rain...
| Virgoincarnate chapter 2 . 6/11/2008
Dude where's the next chap!
| Rain Addict CM chapter 1 . 2/24/2008
dude that was beyond awesome! i can not wait for the rest! so PLEASE write more and post it!
~Smells like Rain...
| Teen Titans Geek hmmm chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
Today is July 4th. In thirteen more days, this story would be a year old.
Which makes me wonder, had you even finished Act two? If you're still perfecting it, just go ahead and update it! We're all dying here! (Especially me!)
...really. Please tell me you'll update soon. *pleads with you* Please update soon!