|Reviews for Crippled|
| Good Luck chapter 1 . 2/20
Thank you for sharing; didn't notice any severe spelling mistakes!
| DMFAZINA chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
yay! i lurve this couple lol this was delicious and i appreciate the treat srsly, i've been looking for like an hour for some shounen ai or something for DOA but couldn't find any, i'm considering writing some myself and seeing that somebody else would write this i consider very helpful! yay . :D
| BC93 chapter 1 . 11/26/2006
i had the idea of hayate kissing ryu to teach him how to kiss!
| SarahBearX chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
So, this is the first DOA tournament right? Well good job! I realy like this! hxh makes me happy! lol. you should check and look for the HxH Community. That's what our stories are about that we put there. Hope you enjoy it, and I love this story! Great job!