Reviews for Betwixt
animeandmanga4evr chapter 6 . 11/24/2013
riku should end up with axel! there's not enough riku x axel stories on the web.
xxxJustAGirlxxx chapter 4 . 2/2/2013
Selphie is annoying :p
Kobugi chapter 6 . 9/16/2011
I love the way you've plotted this story out, haha. It really is hilarious! It's one of the stories I've read, that actually makes me laugh and grin in real life. XD

Papa FTW, yes? He's an amazing character you've come up with. (x And I love the Axel x Riku pairing. It's one of my favorites of the KH fandom, since I can't really get into those obvious Riku x Sora / Axel x Roxas pairings. I kinda wish I could though, since there's so many fics involving those. XD I do enjoy some Roxas x Sora twincest from time to time though, heh~

I dunno if I've actually reviewed for this story yet... If I haven't, I can't believe it. I've reread this on my iTouch a while ago quite a few times! T T" It's too bad that you've been losing interest... but I hope you manage to finish your stories without too much of a hassle! You've brought this story pretty far! And I remember checking out your LJ, but I'm wondering if you've made any updates on there recently? I'll check it out again. XD

Good luck with college and inspiration!
yami bakura chapter 6 . 5/9/2011
Hi. I followed you here from the other site, hoping you'd have more. One chapter doesn't satisfy my need for your fics! You have to keep working on this! Now that I've spazzed, I'm going to go see what else you've got. This is one of my favourite stories so far. Make your fans happy! Come back and finish this! Pureez?
Fredrikness chapter 6 . 10/5/2010
Uhm...

This is effing brilliant!

I hope you didn't die or something, because I want the rest of it!

PLEASE!
apocatlypse chapter 6 . 6/9/2010
i don't know if you're ever going to update this story, but i just thought i'd say that i like this story. like, a lot. :) it's hilarious, and hot, and very well-written. so please, please, continue? :)?
TwistedFate108 chapter 6 . 6/7/2010
Plz update! Im sad! :'(
Kk101 chapter 6 . 6/7/2010
Omg why havent u updated this hilarious story! Im mad!:'(
noxarai chapter 5 . 4/13/2010
Quote: "Chapter six: In which Axel is a complete bastard."

-x-

Aw, isn't he always? xD (3 Axel)
Legendary Chimera chapter 6 . 7/20/2009
So freakin funny it needs to be updated! I've never seen Selphie depicted as a sexual deviant but it's hilarious. Poor Riku, he probably should be in therapy by now.
Fortunate Misfortunes chapter 3 . 2/2/2009
I love this story! Please update soon!
DooBaaDee chapter 6 . 1/25/2009
I love the way you made Selphie so insane. Usually, she's an annoying and stupid little girl but here, she's AWESOME.

This fic is absolutely hilarious and I'm waiting for your next update.
Allied77 chapter 6 . 8/25/2008
This story is the funniest thing I've read in a long time. My throat is sore from laughing like a lunatic! I think Papa is my favorite character. That guy's too much...

Very nice work. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
el bastardo chapter 6 . 8/17/2008
Guh. I am ded from the funny. And the angst. And the general cleverness and good character development. Thank you for writing such awesome fic! I hope there's more soon!
my friend chapter 6 . 7/1/2008
“Then what is the correct way, oh illustrious one?”what does the i word mean?

“The correct way, my sexually inept subject, is to be blunt about it.” what does/is a sexually inept subject?

UPDATE DAMN YOU!

I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! HURRY AND UPDATE DAMNIT!
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