wow. didnt think that eponine would come back, and whys she married to that possesive abusive scumbag? great concept, very well thought out, superb spelling & grammar. awesome story line so far. more installments please!

Um, hi, this is fabulous. Okay, bye.

Yay! More plot bunnies...(random, but I've thought about it ever since I read "When Writers Go Bad.")

This is a nice new chapter-I enjoyed the dialogue very much. I'm glad that Marius wants to see her again, but please don't make this a sneaky love affair. I'm looking forward to seeing them build a real relationship!

Also looking forward to seeing Marius beat the starch out of 'Ponine's husband.

Please update soon!

Mae

Eponine is perfectly in character! I was just beginning to wonder where her crazyness had gone. The conversation between Eponine and Marius is also realistically awkward.

Oh that was good! Chilling of course, but good. Amazing as always, and, as always, I don't have anything constructive to say! :)

-Carol Anne

A wonderful chapter, as always! Glad to know that Marius would want to see Eponine again, how lovely! I think I'll favorite this story

These chapters just keep getting better and better! I really liked Eponine’s characterization in this chapter. Marius’ is pretty nice too, not exactly spot on, but Marius is difficult to work with so I understand.

It’s also nice that you didn’t make Marius forget about Cosette. Most Marius/Eponine fanfiction I see completely ignore Cosette or bash her relentlessly. I’m glad that another writer here is giving her some respect especially a Marius/Eponine writer.

~Terra J

Awesome! Please continue. I want to see what happens to Eponine and Marius!

i love this!

Oh wow, this was a really nice chapter. I was a bit doubtful about the plot pacing in the last chapter, but this chapter has cleared up any doubts. I especially liked this line from Marius, “As we grow older, I think that we all change if only a little bit.”

The quote seems very suiting for both characters in the plot. I like how both characters have changed to suit their new environments, but yet some of their previous attributes remain. I don’t know if it’s just me being a context whore, but I just thought this part was very touching.

A do have a little bit of nitpicks this time around. I would suggest to proof read each chapter many times before submission. There was nothing really bad, but I noticed a few mistakes. The one that stuck out the best was:

“Eponine, are you here.”

Marius is asking a question, and therefore a question mark should be at the end. I’m sure this was probably just a careless typo, but I thought I’d point it out for you. I spotted a few other small mistakes, but there was nothing bad enough to take away from the story.

I like where this is going, please write more.

~Terra J

Yay! New chapter! You know, I feel really sorry for every character, especially Eponine. Living married to an abusive husband while knowing that the man she loves is either dead or married to another girl was probably even worse for her than dying!

Oh, very good! I can't wait for more!

I'm really enjoying your story! Glad to hear that you've found a definate direction for it, and I eagerly await the next chapters.

So glad you decided to keep going! This Les Mis fic is one of my favorites and it seems like it's going to have a wonderfuk plot. Hope you continue soon!

I never got a chance to review your last chapter, but it was great. This story is very intriguing and you have me on the edge of my seat...:D