Reviews for Anecdotes
Guest chapter 2 . 10/8
It's cute you know Japanese enough to utilize it in your story and use it correctly, but it is a bit distracting to use full sentences of Japanese in English written five. One or two words are fine if cleverly placed and you obviously have made yourself well-versed in the culture but when you write like that and with all those footnotes it takes away from the story just a bit. To be fully immersed I mean.
flornoir chapter 11 . 7/17
I've always loved this story, but I never could understand why Sasuke thought the baby could be Gaara's...
teme chapter 2 . 4/18
tupid shit
The Funky Potato chapter 1 . 9/5/2014
I like your writing style.
Simple, neat yet complex.
Guest chapter 11 . 5/14/2014
great story!
Guest chapter 11 . 1/28/2014
ohhh what a cute baby it sooooooo cuuuttee...
well anyway great story keep it up
Sasukexmyha chapter 11 . 1/14/2014
No! Why you stop!?
aurora0914 chapter 11 . 10/25/2013
this was really, really good. How could Sasuke think that Hinata cheated on him?
And does Gaara like her, or something?
Anyway, please update soon. I wish your chapters were longer, but oh well.
Update Soon. Please.
Anon chapter 6 . 5/11/2013
Interesting plot but the pacing needs work. The Japanese words are also unnecessary and distracting, it is inconsistent with rest of the dialogue.
shadow of the lost chapter 11 . 5/2/2013
Gah! So cute! Are you going to add on to this? I sure hope so!
jessica-semnadaprafaze123 chapter 11 . 7/2/2012
omg this is so awesome!
you won't continue? it's a pity, it's a really beautiful fanfiction.
DELETEDACCOUNT453637119927 chapter 11 . 5/1/2011
This is seriously one of the best Sasuhina stories I have ever read. I love your simplistic style of writing, it befits their relationship. I loved the question over Hinata's fidelity and Gaara's obvious interest in her! I really hope you update this, though I guess it's unlikely. I think what I like best with this is that it seems so realistic (if that's the right word) the way that they have not fallen in love but that there is the suggestion that they could.

The Japanese phrases are really good too, it makes it seem more authentic.

Sorry for such a long review!

Cat chapter 11 . 2/12/2011
Lived it! chapter 11 . 9/14/2010
That was awwsome!

I liked the japanese lessons too

i hope youre gonna write some more

i look forward for a next chap

Only One True God - Jesus chapter 11 . 6/12/2010
I think that You should not use Japanese words in the fic.

It makes it very difficult to read even if you put the meaning at the bottom.

We waste time scrolling down and up to see the meaning.

You should also develop the plot more.

Overall a good fic.
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