|Reviews for Fifty Pills|
| Neemarishima chapter 1 . 9/11
Wow. It was a worth reading.
I like your point of view. When you describe each of the section with second point of view, it gives the right vibe because I had to understand whose section it was and thus it makes the feeling for each section become real.
I like how you describe the relationship between Conan and Ai. On the naration we knew that Ai value him much but then from the flasback we knew that Conan did value her much also. I always thought that he is that kind of type who will talk to Ai about ways to do or don't in crime. They are still sweet even tho it is angst.
I like Kaito. Always do. And here I found him to be much lovable. I didn't expect him to be that woman and I like this surprise. It was so KID, you made it really well. And then he got this cool moment when he appeared infront of her. Their interaction was so emotional and sweet... Wow.
Thank you for writing this. Hope you do well with your other stories!
| bright places chapter 1 . 4/7
this is a piece of art. it's so emotional and vivid. thank you.
| pseudonymous.writer.blogger chapter 1 . 7/13/2016
I usually don't like ConanxAi, but this. This.
This, for starters, is a masterpiece. The way you weave in between Haibara, Kaito, and the flashbacks; as well as the way you use second-person is the definition of perfection. I love how layered this piece of fiction is: we can see how Ai struggles with the fact that she is disappointing Shinichi by killing them, the pain as she kills Gin, and the hopelessness she's clouded in. I love how Kaito understands her and saves her, and the goodbye Agasa and Ai had.
It was tragic, heart-breaking, tear-jerking, and creative.
Keep up the good work!
| huehve chapter 1 . 6/8/2016
who's cutting onions again? never knew my eyes would water slightly haha. its such a nice, well- written story. although, i am quite confused of the death of agasa. shiho/haibara killed him?
| Shocked chapter 1 . 5/18/2014
oh my kami.
that was awesome.
| ichiruzuka chapter 1 . 12/4/2013
...I can't even utter a word. The last two sentences really kills.
| Aquos35 chapter 1 . 9/4/2013
Oh...so Vodka was killed. Could you make another interesting story about her taking revenge on the organization? And Kaito Kid's involvement in this story was a very good decision.
Anyway,good luck on your future.
| Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
Tissues? Anyone? A few gallons of ice cream, some chocolates and maybe cake, make it an extra big one...
That was really, whew! I mean, wow...
So in the end she actually did it to get revenge on Vodka.. Brilliant, just brilliant. Especially the part where you finally reveal the scene of Shinichi's death.. Let me just huddle in a corner and cry my heart out again..
Okay, I'm good for another thirty seconds, Awesome work!
| Qapleulia chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
| holmesfreak1412 chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Bravo! So heartbreaking... So perfect.. I have no words save that you had made me cry. I love it.
| butterflieo chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
This was well written with a good plot, and everything tied together very neatly... I loved the emotion, especially the end.
| Skyfell chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
So beautiful... I'm speechless... but not tearless...
| Cathy Daine chapter 1 . 2/27/2010
This story is beautifully written and manages to be true to the characters. The tone and descriptions are faultless. It actually gave me shivers reading this story and I can't tell whether it's because of her brokenness or his brokenness.
Conan that baka. Always the protector. Always the fighter. I cry for Haibara though. Her refusal to let him face everything alone. Sorrow seems too soft of a word. Grief or rather anguish seems more fitting.
It is a fantastic story. I've read it again and again and still my heart aches every time. Well done.
| FaytEnder chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
That was so beautifully written.
And I'm not surprised, this is you and I'll read anything that you write
I can honestly see Ai eventually going after the one who kills Conan.
And on top of it it was CXA.
| Haru Inuzuka chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
O.O Oh my... -shakes head- God, that was really sad!