Reviews for Escape of the Dragon
vanilice chapter 2 . 10/2/2006
waiting for the next

nice though
missgoflightly chapter 2 . 8/5/2006
Please leave the A/Ns for the end. It's very annoying.

And also this is way too overdramatic and the first chapter is too short and moves too fast. It's also very cliched and sounds exactly like the Mewto story. Of course, it's just your first few chapters and you have a lot of room for changing but please mantain some originality and a little less Sueishness in the next chapters.
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bionicle-girl chapter 2 . 6/28/2006
Yeah! Nice chapter! Keep this up!
Farla chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
This is so melodramatic, so cliche, so sueish...Really, think a little about what you're writing. It reads like a rushed, bad knockoff of Mewtwo's background.
bionicle-girl chapter 1 . 6/20/2006
I like it! This story could get quite interesting! I hope you'll update it soon!