|Reviews for Star Wars: What Might Have Been|
| ladylookslikeadude chapter 16 . 7/26/2008
Very cool, I liked it.
| The Grandiloquent Demagogue chapter 12 . 1/1/2008
Though I fear the amount of angst it would contain, this chapter alone deserves a sequel.
| The Grandiloquent Demagogue chapter 3 . 1/1/2008
"If Anakin were to save his mother?"
Are you kidding me? That would have enormous repercussions. For one thing, he would temporarily stave off the fall to the Dark Side. He could probably then take her to Coruscant to live under the protection of the Jedi Order. She would be able to help him with his doubts and fears. Palpatine would have to kill both her and Padme, and when Anakin loses both of them at once, he would be become even more anguished and fall harder into the Dark Side.
| Barranca chapter 14 . 6/30/2007
Your story is amazingly good, it explores all those what ifs that those who emerge in the GFFA world come across. There is only one path but there are so many possibilities, this is what fanfiction is really about.
| Kratos42 chapter 16 . 3/9/2007
Well, this was probably the most poorly written thing I've seen in months. With entire passages totally stolen from Matthew Stover, a complete lack of originality, total disregard for grammar, spelling, capitalization, punctuation, and paragraph rules, you've really made something horrible out of this. God knows that in no way is this good, and in no way does it follow any logic, either common sense-wise or Star Wars-wise. Quick question: How does Palpatine make an army of clone Sith including Vader when Vader NEVER existed? Truly, it's terrible.
| Morriganna chapter 15 . 2/27/2007
| CMWright chapter 13 . 2/10/2007
This is great, every part of it. You're one of the best at writing Force duels, and all your what-if ideas are plausible and fairly believable. And I love your writing style.
| Anime-StarWars-fan-zach chapter 13 . 1/28/2007
This was a GREAT chapter. Very intense lightsaber duels. I loved it. Do you think you could R&R my fic? It's called Yoda: Dark Lord of the Sith. I'd like your opinion on it. Update soon.
| Morriganna chapter 13 . 1/28/2007
By the Force that was amazing!
| Anime-StarWars-fan-zach chapter 12 . 1/27/2007
This was pretty good. I hope you make more soon. Update soon.
| Morriganna chapter 12 . 12/9/2006
| grace1237 chapter 12 . 10/2/2006
Your ideas are so good...and especially the last...Sith Obi-Wan was pretty unexpected. But the stories were excellent, I love them :)
| Mark Solo chapter 12 . 10/1/2006
cool love it all
| bughunters chapter 9 . 9/30/2006
Well, this was certainly chilling, especially your description of what happened to Aayla. I shudder at the horrors Sidious plans for her to endure.
| MonCappy chapter 11 . 8/18/2006
I think a sequel to this installment should be done. One that continues on from this point.