Reviews for Left Unsaid
some-silly-username chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
This is a perfectly constructed masterpiece, containing everything you'd look for in a one-shot about these two amazing characters. Well done :)
Concolor44 chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
A one-shot it may be, but simple? I think not. You've compressed a great deal of emotion into these few words, deftly and flawlessly.

This goes into Favorites.
ThoughtsLightAndFireAndSound chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
this was pretty good! i do find that first person povs are tricky since you have to be so in character the whole i felt that due to the nature of the plot, raven felt a tad ooc at times
but other than that i felt this was really quite a good attempt. her thought process and emotions were detailed down pretty well and there was a nice flow
and the whole 'don't hate you' thing was great :D
BlackCatNeko999 chapter 1 . 4/22/2013
This was amazing! I couldn't stop reading, just had to find out how it'll end.
The last scene was so cute XDD I loved it!
Rainbor123 chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
DANG! I REALLLY wanna know what she said to him...
aangismyhomie chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
GOD WHY DIDN'T THIS HAPPEN IN THE SHOW. Seriously. Your comprehension of the relationship between these two makes it sound like you created them. "Yes, he was annoying at first, but only because he didn't allow me to be withdrawn and closed off and anti-social like everyone else did. That was the reason that he had been on the receiving end of my temper more than anyone else. He never once let me resign myself to being dark and creepy and alone, even when I wanted to be." Just perfect, this is going right into my favorites.
PaulieJuice chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
I love you.

Just, ya know, if you were wondering or something.
StarCatchers42 chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
AWWW. So cute. But I was kinda hoping that she would say she loves him :/ BBRae forever, this was adorable, you are awesome, what did she say to make him so mad?
Kusami32 chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
I can totally see raven doing that lol she could never say the word love. Awesome one-shot I enjoyed reading it.
Sharpclaws chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
this was cute.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
Pretty good. For a newbie
BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
Well, she would have trouble thinking, much less saying, the "L" word.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
I don't hate you too. :) Cute. :)
Scriptor Sapiens chapter 1 . 5/8/2012
Very nice. Very very nice. This was awesome to read.
Cassie chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
Sososososososo adorable :3 I absolutely love it!
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