|Reviews for Left Unsaid|
| RisenGrave chapter 1 . 6/5/2007
Awesome story. I laugheed at the I don't hate you lines. Very effective. Good metaphors. Keep up the good story.
| Shulblaka Saphira chapter 1 . 4/23/2007
Poor Rae, can't let her emotions loose. But we all love our goth witch just the way she is. Anyways, great job and keep up the good work!
| Tefnut Talvi chapter 1 . 3/8/2007
nice. I liked how u made it Raven who ended the fight, not BB with raven going to her room. Got one ? What did she say that was so bad?
| i.am.emerson.tuesday chapter 1 . 2/15/2007
that was really good!
what did she say?
| Frosty Pickle Juice chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
That's such a great idea! I think that that's probably one of the best interactions I've seen between them in a while.
| schemily200 chapter 1 . 1/18/2007
i dont hate you too. im gunna say that to my boyfriend. he'll be confused. then he'll have to read this. If he can read. I hope he can read... lol _
| FireDitto chapter 1 . 12/18/2006
I think you did a wonderful job on the first-person POV; the story flows easily, and is very good to read. I enjoyed it. I particularly liked the "I don't hate you"s, very amusing ;) and I think that's the best and probably most IC way I've seen Raven admit she likes BB ;)
Honestly, can you really picture Raven going "I love you"? -grins-
Great story, very enjoyable, and again, wonderful job on the First-Person prospective.
| titanfan45 chapter 1 . 11/21/2006
That is the best one shot that I have ever read. Raven saying that she didn't hate Beastboy in such a way to say she loved him was really well thought out.
| Scribe of Aurora chapter 1 . 10/28/2006
Wow. I loved this. It was really sweet, but kinda deep at the same time. I thing you did just fine with Raven's POV.
| ntmnky chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
I liked this a lot. Keep up the good work.
| VeelaChic chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
AW times a bazillion and 4
| Leper Gnome chapter 1 . 8/10/2006
I really love this! That was really, really good. It's really good for a first time doing a first-person perspective. I just gotta ask: What was it that Raven said to make Beast Boy so upset? I have a thing about not knowing stuff that triggers big reactions, so...yeah. Anyway, great story, once again, and later!
| Knowledge in the Hollow Noggin chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
aww how sweet, i love how Raven refuses to admit she "likes" BB, but say "dont hate" quite clever, you are quite the talented author.
*applauds at your greatness*
| Nocturnal Magic chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
Awesome job! The ending was really cute
| She Knows Best chapter 1 . 8/1/2006
I like how you end your stories. Nothings rushed or anything, everything just, feels right afterwards :).