Reviews for Twin Blade of the Heavens |
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![]() ![]() ![]() YAY_SO you must UPDATE think of the poor helpless...CHICKENS... ...*cough* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice setup chapter. Please, continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool! I can't wait to see the next chapter!So PLZ get it up ASAP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh i love it_ * five stars_just update soon:(please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a pretty good story, a bit too mushy at times, but that's overlookable. I'm glad you extended to you chapters because I'm enjoying your writing. Also, it seems you like Avatar - The last Airbender... good taste. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hm i think Yukiko would be nice but any last name is fine.. err any village is fine with me but other than that, thank you very much for letting me be apart of the story cindee |
![]() ![]() ![]() o awesome! i am totally wanting to be a ninja that helps out.. keep up the awesome work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd like to bo a ninja from a neighboring village! And I can't wait to see what you have planed for the next chapter! chey |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sigh* Low-life even stole my special THE KISS scene ... I don't believe this ... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, well ... What an absolute low life you are ... If you liked my writing and wanted to borrow a descriptive section of it, all you had to do was ask You have no right to just take someone's written piece of work like that ... if you've been following my story, you'll have noticed they are months apart and the chapters are long, and that is because I take a lot of time and energy to write, to make it as nice and possible for people to enjoy .. Low-life, low-life ... Seriously, if you have to steal other people's written work , then just stop writing, stop submitting chapters, because that's the lowest thing you can do. Just because we all write 'Naruto is not mine' Disclaimers, doesn't mean you can just take other people's written elements and use them for yourself Your action just disgusted me, that's why I'm writing a public review, otherwise I would never, never, never, never be so horrible Get a life |
![]() ![]() ![]() you fear to spend your entire life loving someone … but have to live in the terror that they might not return …”,“Seeing someone, Kayume, you may be afraid to meet them. Upon meeting them ,Upon meeting them, you may be afraid to kiss them …”,And when you kiss them, you may be afraid to love them,“And finally, upon loving them, you will be afraid to lose them …”,“Kayume … do you know when I was in love, Kayume? Do you know just when I knew how madly, how hopelessly I’d fallen for you …,“I couldn’t sleep anymore, because reality was finally better than my dreams ... hey! those lines are from "flower of konoha"! ... |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg aww that was the sweetest thing! made me get a warm n fuzzy feeling :-) i really liked this chapter. Peace. X3Bre |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! Gotta be my fav chapter so far! Can't wait to see what you have planed for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Sweet and Romantic! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow longest chapter yet ;-) i loved it lol, it was not only sweet, but a lot of humor too! i cant wait till next chapter, ive been waiting for their kiss ;-) |