Reviews for Twin Blade of the Heavens
jgsparks chapter 27 . 7/28/2006
YAY_SO you must UPDATE think of the poor helpless...CHICKENS... ...*cough*
prismdragon chapter 26 . 7/27/2006
Nice setup chapter. Please, continue.
spookpook1 chapter 26 . 7/27/2006
Cool! I can't wait to see the next chapter!So PLZ get it up ASAP!
jgsparks chapter 26 . 7/27/2006
oh i love it_ * five stars_just update soon:(please!
prismdragon chapter 25 . 7/26/2006
This is a pretty good story, a bit too mushy at times, but that's overlookable. I'm glad you extended to you chapters because I'm enjoying your writing. Also, it seems you like Avatar - The last Airbender... good taste.
cookiee-chan chapter 24 . 7/26/2006
hm i think Yukiko would be nice but any last name is fine.. err any village is fine with me but other than that, thank you very much for letting me be apart of the story

cindee
cookiee-chan chapter 25 . 7/26/2006
o awesome!

i am totally wanting to be a ninja that helps out..

keep up the awesome work!
spookpook1 chapter 25 . 7/26/2006
I'd like to bo a ninja from a neighboring village! And I can't wait to see what you have planed for the next chapter!

chey
Princess-Tsunade chapter 24 . 7/26/2006
*sigh*

Low-life even stole my special THE KISS scene ...

I don't believe this ...
Princess-Tsunade chapter 23 . 7/26/2006
Well, well ...

What an absolute low life you are ...

If you liked my writing and wanted to borrow a descriptive section of it, all you had to do was ask

You have no right to just take someone's written piece of work like that ... if you've been following my story, you'll have noticed they are months apart and the chapters are long, and that is because I take a lot of time and energy to write, to make it as nice and possible for people to enjoy ..

Low-life, low-life ...

Seriously, if you have to steal other people's written work , then just stop writing, stop submitting chapters, because that's the lowest thing you can do.

Just because we all write 'Naruto is not mine' Disclaimers, doesn't mean you can just take other people's written elements and use them for yourself

Your action just disgusted me, that's why I'm writing a public review, otherwise I would never, never, never, never be so horrible

Get a life
jgsparks chapter 24 . 7/25/2006
you fear to spend your entire life loving someone … but have to live in the terror that they might not return …”,“Seeing someone, Kayume, you may be afraid to meet them. Upon meeting them ,Upon meeting them, you may be afraid to kiss them …”,And when you kiss them, you may be afraid to love them,“And finally, upon loving them, you will be afraid to lose them …”,“Kayume … do you know when I was in love, Kayume? Do you know just when I knew how madly, how hopelessly I’d fallen for you …,“I couldn’t sleep anymore, because reality was finally better than my dreams ...

hey! those lines are from "flower of konoha"! ...
Saikio chapter 24 . 7/25/2006
omg aww that was the sweetest thing! made me get a warm n fuzzy feeling :-) i really liked this chapter.

Peace.

X3Bre
spookpook1 chapter 24 . 7/25/2006
Loved it! Gotta be my fav chapter so far! Can't wait to see what you have planed for the next chapter!
spookpook1 chapter 23 . 7/23/2006
So Sweet and Romantic!
Saikio chapter 23 . 7/21/2006
wow longest chapter yet ;-) i loved it lol, it was not only sweet, but a lot of humor too! i cant wait till next chapter, ive been waiting for their kiss ;-)
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