Reviews for Inevitable Surrender
Cyberwolf chapter 1 . 6/20/2006
Squee, more NejiTen from you! A solid piece, with awesome characterization. Neji and Tenten feel so...real when you write them. Not OOC, not mushy, not clumsy. (Personally I can't do it, so I hide behind a 'humor' excuse to explain their massive OOCness) I especially liked how Tenten - very understandably - went off to train and vent, and how Neji was listening for her all the while. Is it significant that instead of his Byakugan, he used his sense of hearing to find her?
TheSilverMirror chapter 1 . 6/19/2006
Aw... that was so cute _

And he was so worried about her. Hehe.

Being carried around in Neji's arms really would be almost worth getting stabbed in the back.

And he heard her... was it her calling out to him that he heard? Like, a psychic connection or something?

Tenten and Neji are MEANT TO BE! Yah n.n
xxX POISON Xxx chapter 1 . 6/19/2006
that was a very nice story! i look forward to more of your work.
Akino Matoumiken chapter 1 . 6/19/2006
Very prettyful characterization of Tenten... I liked hwo this wasn't inevitable mushy *laughs* It's refreshing to see nice fics pop up like this 3
Sequ3stered chapter 1 . 6/19/2006
Brilliant work. Your writing is superb and the ending sweet and poignant. This fic is definitely a plus for the growing collection of NejiTenten fics on the site! :) I particularly enjoyed Tenten's characterization: powerful, but not omnipotent (as many fics attempt to give her power that she doesn't have).
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