Reviews for Coming Back
QUEENSPELLER67 chapter 1 . 8/15/2016
Oh, that was so sad!
Anthony1l chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
This story is heart-breaking, interesting, original, tear-jerking, and unique.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
Good, but one error. Pikachu is male. There's so much evidence it's not funny. I mean, no tail dent, attract from girl pokémon working, saying 'he' in both the Japanese and american versions, the list goes on. Why do so many people think he's a girl?
Yamamori Amaya chapter 1 . 4/16/2002
Man-you-are-obsessed-with-death-and-ghosts-coming-back-Riny-chan! LOL, sorry, I couldn't resist. Good job! I loved the plot twist. At first, I though that Lily or someone had died...but I was wrong!
starbuzzedu2 chapter 1 . 3/23/2002
A huge wave came over me, but it didn't just hold

sadness, it also held relief. All I can say is

that was beautiful.
Jessiejames chapter 1 . 2/18/2002
:**-( *starts sobbing* Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! Why'd you kill Ash?

Great story though!
evm chapter 1 . 12/25/2001
How sad!
Fletset chapter 1 . 11/17/2001
Wow...that was so's the second time I'm reading this, only now I'm able to review ~_.
ShadowTrainer chapter 1 . 9/29/2001
That's som'ut like Forever. I love your stories.
Joey Oak chapter 1 . 9/22/2001
Great fic! I like it but it's sad. Poor Ash... At first I thought it was Gary who died and then I remembered that Gary was training at mount silver in my fic. Heh heh... Stooge on me! ;;
Kitty Meow chapter 1 . 9/17/2001
*sniff* how could you seperate the most bestest (is that a word?) pair in Pokémon? Ahhhh!
yg chapter 1 . 9/7/2001
awesome story again!
Vickie211 chapter 1 . 6/7/2001
You're the master of mush, Riny! That was so beautiful. I feel like I was right there crying with Misty. I can't say anymore. I have to go cry some more. Bravo!
The Demon Princess chapter 1 . 6/7/2001
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