This story is absolutely brilliant, it's such a shame it was never finished. This chapter feels a little bit rushed but the story is fascinating and very well written.

Electra is a stupid name, way to go giving her a superhedro/villian name.

Great story!

Harry gets abused and used, and Harry wants more. Author has a fetish for boys being fucked.

Szkoda,źe ten Harry sprawia wrażenie idioty…to zabiera sporo wiarygodności historii.

what a boring story

truly an excellent well thought out story
I love that Harry was kept a minor and not involved in fighting the whole time. that the adults around him took the time to be adults

i loved the ff. at first i was a bit scepticel because the header only mentioned Dumbledore and Harry as mc's but the moment i started reading the ff i was hooked. i read it start to end in only a few hours without pause except for changing the room for meals :).

Chapter 15 and same still boring. Plus he still refuses to trust.

The pace of the story is too too slow. Certainly chapters are longer and considering how much effort writing takes, thanks for that. But! But it's too too slow. N where are regular communications with death Eater which was projected as the gist of story! They're far less to say they are communications, simple letters yes. But not enough for Harry to form clear opinion or take help. Disappointed, so many chapters in and all Harry has done is: get beaten up by his cousin, exploited by his relatives and order, get angry at Dumbledore, Order, death eaters, relatives; be suspicious and confused continuously of everyone; and still no particular direction the story is going to. Very very disappointed.

Good grins. Would love to see this finished and, perhaps, this chapter reworked a bit ... Thanks for a fun read ...

I'm done with this stupid story and STUPID HARRY!

Come on, you know you have like one more half-chapter on your computer somewhere, just give us our denouement. The work is amazing, and deserves to end with appropriate style. Your so close and it’s so good.
- S

Twelve years late though this review is, what a great story. There are a few plot holes but you have created an excellent work and universe here. I realize you may not be monitoring your ffn account and may feel the story fairly close to finished but I do hope that someday, rl etc allowing, you will bring this excellent piece to a close. Thanks very much for your hard work on it so far.

I am highly disappointed that this story wasn't finished. Given it was last updated in 2008... I doubt it will ever be, but dear gods this was a good story. Thank you for posting what you have/did for us to read and offer our feedback/thoughts on.