Reviews for The End: Raven's Wrath |
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![]() ![]() It would be nice if you had a method other than dialogue tags to denote thoughts. |
![]() ![]() NOOOOOOO KEEP WRITING IM DYING |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, i always wanted to see an evil raven fic. Shouldn't Raven be alot more powerful than your making her though even against the justice league? I have a suggestion for the story, just a thought you don't have to use it though, why not give Raven a few half siblings like in the comics, for back-up? I have no real complains about this fic and i only review fics worth my time so please update as soon as you can! |
![]() ![]() ![]() is it still in progress?I wanna read all! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad to see this story being make excellent use of the Justice League in this story. I hate to say it, but Raven looks to be beyond redemption at this point. I wonder if she intends to be in that library when the fusion cannon fires... Great job on the update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() NICE! lol Freaking loved it! Poor Raven, I hope she kills them all! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOOT! AWESOME! LOVED IT! UPDATE ASAP! I freaking loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I started reading this on another site, was glad to see it on this site and updated at that! Great job on this so far. The characters seem to be as they are on TV (in character). Evil Raven is very believable and seems beyond saving at this point.I hope you will keep updating this as I would like to see how it turns out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...evil Raven... is so TOTALLY AWESOME! I can't wait to see her beat the crap out of superman... that is if u make her and stuff... (him and his gigantic ego) no offence if your a superman fan or anything... |
![]() ![]() ![]() lmao! stupid him, thinking he could just run at her lol kill them all! lol please update asap it was great! bye :) ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() you are GREAT!THATS ALL |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! Who is she going to attack? The Titans, the Justice League, or... oh, no... she's going to... attack... Robin, isn't she? *to self* Okay, enough with the questions! *Back to you* Update any time now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() intriguing...seems like Raven is upto giving the heroes a real painful death rite? ... ... .. . GOOD! bring in as much torture as you can...me like torture :D by the way, include Robin in the next chapter because it would be real cool if Raven decided to end the person whom she has a mental link with; she can also use the mental link as an advantage to torture him... ...im good :D update soon and keep up the gr8 work! CI |