Reviews for Black Magic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I've read one other Dominatrix!Hermione story, but I have to say, yours is FAR better. Maybe because it's much shorter and straight to the point, or maybe it's because the other one I read was Hermione using her dominatrix side to seduce, yet at the same time, torture Harry, because she overheard him say to Ron that he considered her a "sister", and yours did NOT have that aspect, which probably made it even better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() need more threesome .. to fuck her in both way at once |
![]() ![]() ![]() You had an interesting idea for a plot. I like BDSM, and although I am not a fan of Harry/Hermione, I am accepting of it. If it could be written convincingly. But this has to be one of the most far-fetched things I have ever read. First of all, Harry and Hermione are BEST FRIENDS and they have been best friends for years. Even if Hermione did like him, I doubt she would ever approach Harry that way, especially before they are even in a relationship. Hermione would never try to seduce him like that, and she would never oversexualize to get anyone's attention. The premise was interesting but the story you wrote was terrible unrealistic |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol, good one shot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() All I can say to this is well wow. So wow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Black Magic...Black Magic... Oh! Now I get it! I am so slow sometimes! Hahahahahahahahahahahahah! That was such a smexy fic! I loved it. Not one of my favorite couples but it's by you so no wonder it's good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() you used the word guttural a lot haha but it was very good. who knew hermione was such a hormone driven teen? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hot but too short. write more next time, damnit. lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Vomit... noisily* Sickening, shame to you, you raped canon. And liqefied my brain, mentally scarred me, and well now I can't have any ice cream because I literally feel physically sick... I hope you're happy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Um...it was nice, but graphic, a little too graphic for me, but whatev, and some of the stuff you have them say people don't say in England. Anyway, nice... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a cute story. Please make some more. Harry and Hermione forever. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That poor little boy being stalked Hermione was very demanding...LOL Good Job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my! Harry is VERY well hung! That lucky bitch! |