Reviews for Seven Years
uhhhhh chapter 23 . 11/28/2009
Okay, it has some real potential;

OK plot

Nice twist with the Sirius' Story thing

BUT...

LOTS of spelling and grammar mistakes!

Its a little hard to read, so run through it with a fine tooth comb, cross all the T's and dot the... lower-case J's.

(Sorry, Wayne's World fanatic)
uhhh chapter 6 . 11/28/2009
You realize you spelt "physically" wrong, right?

Anyhoo, its good.
MopCat chapter 1 . 4/11/2009
A good start, although it's a little hard to read. Maybe if you spaced it all out and started each new line of speech on a different line?

Other then a few spelling/tense mistakes it's excellent.

*runs off to read next chapter*
Elvish-Princess99 chapter 1 . 12/28/2008
Potential to be good but...my eyes are killing me! And seriously, some of your grammar errors are ridiculous. "Did Jamie sent you?" It should be: "Did Jamie SEND you?" If you get a beta, this could be excellent. I used to type in big paragraphs too. Sorted it, no complaints anymore.
xXNikoletta BlackXx chapter 2 . 8/3/2008
Wow all that inner voice stuff hurt my smut infested head! But I liked it cuz its just so Jamie...Only he would have a conversation with his own inner marauder!
green9721 chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
i think you should revise this story... at least fix the grammar- its painful to try to read this as is. I'm sure the storyline is great, but I can't bear to read through the horrible grammar to find out. Also fix the spelling. (Kings Cross, Gryffindor, etc.)
rekahneko chapter 22 . 11/28/2007
Cute chapter!

I love a happy Remus...

Hehehe
mokubahv chapter 1 . 11/3/2007
Grammar! Please, please, please look into getting a beta! This is much too hard to get through. I tried, I really tried, but oh! my brain! it hurts. TT-TT
CrazyChipmunkGoneHyper chapter 21 . 8/7/2007
nice story
SetTheTruthFree chapter 21 . 8/7/2007
i wish i has a Sirius to take care of my frustrations...but then again...he'd just prolly frustrate me more...good chapter though

Update soon PLease

...i'll give ya a cookie if ya do
SetTheTruthFree chapter 20 . 8/7/2007
poor Remus...makes me wonder whether or not he'll be shunned by James' parents...
SetTheTruthFree chapter 19 . 8/7/2007
my thoughts exactly, poor Remus...
SetTheTruthFree chapter 18 . 8/7/2007
ahh tis okay, i don't mind the short ones, as long as u update regularly. I like ur evil plan though
SetTheTruthFree chapter 17 . 8/7/2007
you shoulda put wat remus said to, it woulda made the chapter longer, and more interesting, but w/e wat's done is done and it was still good XD
SetTheTruthFree chapter 16 . 8/7/2007
aww

i hate it went that happens cuz u dont wanna disapoint readers, but ur all like "aghh i curse this cold and anyone who gave it to me"...or is that just me?...anywhoos...on to the next chapter of this fantastic tale
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