Oh god... you i could see naruto doing something this... fucked up! 10/10

You should write a one shot on when they discover who's on the cover!

*helpless laughter* oh my gosh that's a freakin pricless way to end this story! I'd be funny to see a oneshot or something that has everyone finding out just who the cover girl is...not that anyone would believe it!

Geez Louise, those are some long orochimaru rants!

It has been a while but I decided I should continue and finish this soon.

Hmm, nothing particularly noticeable error wise. I mean, in actuality a lot of off character moments but that is implied with the plot and nothing bigger than normal. So... No, can't really point anything out.

I reviewed this chapter just a moment ago when I realized that I wasn't logged in. I love reading this fic, I makes me laugh. I like your Orochimaru so much, and the changes that you made him go through over time due to Naruto exposure seems realistic to me. I was wondering what happened to the sequel and if it would be reposted and maybe updated someday.

I love this fic so much. I've read it several times now but I wondered what happened to the sequel and if you were ever going to write more of it again.

How the hell did he revert back to male form? Fu?

Yes, definitely a good amount of hilarity in this chapter. Hilarity indeed. Hope Gui doesn't end up living with them. There is only so much youth I can handle.

A lot of touching and meaningful gifts there... Shit man, I don't think I could give up half that stuff, damn.

Nice little "oh fu" moment at the end there. Orochimaru just doesn't sound like the kind of drunk you would want around...

A few plot bombshells dropped in this chapter. Good ones, you know, the spicy kind. Got to love my napalm. Mmmmm.

Most interesting. Well, did the weird pauses and drunkenness pretty well.

Um... Pretty sure Neji is like a servant in the Hyuga family. As in, he would be doing a lot of chores. Also, a while back you had Hinata being very assertive. Can't say I ever remember her having the kind of social skills to do that with no hesitation. You really have changed the time line quite a bit. Not saying it is a bad thing, fits for this story quite well. Just thought I should point it out.

The sad part is that when I see a minor error, it legitimately looks like an error, not a lack of knowledge. So I can't even go on one of my rants. Which is agonizing... Whatever.

Ooh, so the plot thickens a bit.

Ahh, poor Neji.

Hmm, this fic has a very interesting and dull concept for one that is occupying my attention so much. One of those stories that is great because of pure skill, not the idea in itself. Must admit that you make it interesting for sure.

So the jutsu was that easy to remove? Why the hell didn't Naruto do it earlier?

Hmm, things are kind of complicated huh. Fun.

Search parties, research, lies. Quite a bit going on here.

Where the hell did Orochimaru even get more clothes? Neji had the "Hey target *pass by*" scene. Classical man, woot.

So it was the sexy jutsu? Why didn't it wear off?

Neji wants to stay? That is just weird. *shoots at rats* Ahh, hilarious.

Most obvious way? What, do you have to cut it with a chakra scalpel or something?

How exactly is capturing Orochimaru A class? I was thinking S class or something... Whatever.

Shouldn't Naruto have money himself? Like, a lot of money. He did just get back from an A class. Regardless of whether they are hiding it or not I would think they would have given him some pay off the record... Whatever.