I do indeed like this. Hmm, your characterizations feel real. That is a definite.

What the hell could Naruto possibly have to worry about though? So what if Orochimaru is acting. Can't do anything to Naruto. Can't even leave Naruto.

A few really weird wording errors in the beginning. I can make out what it is supposed to be but.. Very weird errors. How do you even make an errors like that?

Your use of the - mark is questionable? Can you explain it to me? I am rather interested.

Your approach at this story is slow and agonizing. I like it, very realistic, very interesting.

Naruto mentions a Jutsu as the reason Orochimaru is like that. What jutsu?

This is really good for a prologue. More than good actually, you gave us some serious incite into what the story is going to be like, all the while showing off your skill.

The anticipation that is set, the emotion about the unfold. Everything throughout the entire chapter was intense. Oh yes, your skill was definitely shown. If this is what I have to look forward to, then I will be more than satisfied.

The only sad part is that I now have to find a way to critic this story. Going to be hard.

I guess I could make something out of the entire "Orochimaru girl" part but, that would be nit picking.

I at least know this is in the future. Right? Pretty sure Naruto is technically still a Genin in canon. Also pretty sure Sasuke killed Orochimaru.

All I can really nitpick about is all the loose ends but... It is a prologue, there are supposed to be loose ends.

Huh. I skipped straight to this chapter from the first...okay, but I don't like Naruto being polite to him, even if he has turned into some kind of ninja version of Fujiwara-no-Sai. Naruto is almost never polite, and a reformed Orochimaru shouldn't get more than the careless respect he gives other 'comrades' even if he has taught him stuff. Stuff learned by evil, evil means. Naruto has saved HIM, even if I don't know how it happened. Meh. Old snake-face shouldn't get the deference.

Hm. At least he's not a girl anymore. Sasuke is going to be rightfully pissed off. When and how did he get saved, I wonder.

this is a very funny story

All four of them are little girl of a man. Seriously. All we need is them squealing in freakish delight.

I read this years ago, when you first posted it, and it was the most amazing thing I had ever seen. I think that it's the only fic where I actually like Orochimaru. You have the Sannin's dynamics down. Thank you so much for sharing your amazingly awesome writing talent with us all!

Haha love the fic!

BWAHAHAHAHAHA! The Perfect Crack ending for a touching story.

*snerk* You trained Orochi in the Rat Fist.

im sitting here at 4 in the morning tring to stay quite while laughting! its so hard! YOU HAVE A GIFT! lol

wooho you put in haruka kanta! i love that song

I read this story a long, long time ago but never reviewed. I just re-read the entire thing, and I still enjoy it. Now that the end is reached, I am glad that Naruto let Orochimaru go, that Orochimaru got to show his feelings to Tsunade, and that Orochimaru was not caught and executed. The epilogue was hilarious. Orochimaru banned a book on pain of death for any who break the law (Hallo, book censorship!)... and all the other people who had the special edition book... It was a fantastic, humorous read.

loved this chapter.

only they knew indeed.

I really loved this story. possibly because of its creativity and the fact that you don't usually see a female oro.

I LOVE how oro was so uncomfortable in his female body and jiraiya constantly "eyeing" him. XD