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![]() ![]() ![]() This is was very enjoyable. Brava! |
![]() ![]() ![]() THIS. IS. DARLING! I LOVE that Jack lets Carter dangle, not knowing for a bit, then invites her to come play with the toy with them. SO CUTE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this one! The moment of horror that Carter experiences when she thinks Jonas used her or (gasp!) O'Neill's credit card to order something was hilarious. Also, remote controlled helicopters are cool in any case and I really get a kick out of the mental image of one zooming around the base at night. Lastly, I really think you nailed the characters for this. Hammond and Jack's reactions to Jonas's helicopter are spot on. :) Thanks a heap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So funny! I can totally see that happening. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thats cool. I can just imagine Jonas doing something like that. And its true the gateroom would be about the only decent place he could fly it, not like theres that much room in his room or hallways. Funny story and thank you for writing a Jonas story, he's such a great charater. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, this is adorable. Clever, witty, funny, and spot-on with the characterization. I love the idea of Jonas flying a toy helicopter around in the gateroom at night, LOL! Poor Sam. She's like the big sister who gets in trouble for sneaking candy to her little brother. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Jonas fic. This was really cute an very well executed. I think you've hit the voices of the characters very well, and it's always good to see some Jonas... Thank you |
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![]() ![]() ![]() that was great! i laughed much. poor jonas in the mountain all the time. i love that he's flying it around the gate room! excellent story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute! Jonas doesn't get enough love in fanfic. This was really fun, thanks for sharing it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() “Ya know, Carter, subversion by proxy is still subversion.” This is one of my favorite lines in all of SG-1 fanfic. Bravo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() xD Very nice writing. Lovely little idea, and beautiful 'execution'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! So cute! I can just imagine Jonas flying an RC helicopter round the hgatroom (which probably says somethign for my sanity but...there we go! ;)) CUte ficlet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute and silly and yet very much in character. Short and sweet and typical of the team dynamic that was just starting to show through circa season 6 end. Made me happy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was cute! Good Job! I would've liked to see that on the show! It would've been hiliarious! |