|Reviews for Thirst|
| Star Dust of Ancient Novae chapter 1 . 11/4/2010
| Obsessed Pam chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
Your ability to convey so much with so few words is both admirable and horribly frustrating when I'd just love your stories to last longer...
| CharmedAli chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
good, simple and pure, simple in a good way by the way
| TaniaChesalaRhotmail.com chapter 1 . 6/24/2006
I wish there was just a little bit more to this, more in the 'provocative' sense..just a tiny bit more, but that still didn't stop me from squee-ing..Oh how I love Sheyla smut!
| Ognonamis chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
Nice imagery...Love it.
| Wedjatqi chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
Really nice. Short and sweet. Liked how he approached her in the water, I'm off to read your other work...
| Camy chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
Sel, is that you? OH, my goodness..this is HOT! Love it!
| Harleyzgirl chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
Smoking. Thank God for the water to keep the flames from consuming the reader as well. Nicely done.
| Alipeeps chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
Ooh, beautiful little piece. Very descriptive and atmospheric. Lovely.
| Cpt. Ritter chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
| spiritedchihiro chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
hehe...awesome! so very sensual! anyway well written!
| trecebo chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
I'll get back to you when my computer becomes solid again...
No, really...that wasn't like flaming hot but truly smoldering kinda hot...Good stuff.