Reviews for Forevermore
George Mathew chapter 4 . 7/6/2008
This story is Really Great So Dont stop now When its started and things are gettin Dont Make Keitaro An ABSOLUT WEAKLING OR TOO DEPENDANT. Waiting for next CAPTER...
HarimaHige chapter 4 . 6/4/2008
Interessting story. Im looking forward to read more. I only hope the story comes to the main point. Tsuruko and Keitaro.
Starfire99 chapter 4 . 4/3/2008
It's been quite a long time since you updated this story. Are you planning on ever finishing it?
AznPuffyHair chapter 4 . 3/10/2008
Moral of this story so far...:

1) Don't tick off Tsu-chan. a given and should be put into the bible.

2) Never refer Rei or Shana to any animate. And if one wish to do so, be sure to hire some good protection.

3) The bad guys are always idiotic in some way, be it their schemes, way of approaching things, or just some stupid mistakes and how they react to it.

4) Never follow a woman who can split a train in two.

5) Never sent people to do something you can do by yourself.

6) Never leave the reader wanting more and not updating for a while.

...I think that's all there is to it So UPDATE SOON!.
Heliosion chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
Nice fic read the full thing would like you to um update it more than once a year but good fic with potential just dont keep me waiting forever yah
Keikun4283 chapter 3 . 10/2/2007
Well I guess I couldn't review for the 4th chapter so here it is for this one. Its nice to see this one redone and up again. I hope you get out more soon cause I've been wantin to know what happened after the 4th. I reread all the chapters as well just to get caught up again. Well hope you update again soon cause Ill be waitin.
Unknown chapter 4 . 9/28/2007
Woohoo, an update at last I have been waiting for I can't even remember how long to see a new chapter for your stories released.
KChasm chapter 4 . 9/27/2007
I'm going to be entirely honest with you, okay?

First few chapters, I loved it, loved it. It was awesome, great.

But then...

All these new characters being introduced, way, way too quickly. It's difficult to keep up with something like this. One chapter isn't anywhere near enough to get used to one new character, let alone two.

Also quite alarming is the fact that all these new characters seem to be pointless cameos. I mean, you've got a character from a different anime. Now, this would be excusable if this were a crossover, except it's not-all these cameos you've introduced, you've changed their roles, their pasts. So what's the point of putting them in the story, if you're going to do that? Just so readers could go "lolololo i know that guy, he's from another manga"?

Also-major personality jump of Tsuruko's between Ch. 1 and latest chapters?
The light of darkness chapter 4 . 9/27/2007
are you gona add the fifth chapter soon? I think you keep reposting the same chapter over and over with a few improvements. but anyway...

Nice (as usual to most of the stories i read) chapter. Look forward (also usual) to your next update. And PLEASE post the next chapter soon (not so usual).
RandomReview chapter 4 . 9/27/2007
Haha I enjoy the parodies really well, but the Tsuruko -oro gets annoying...

Either way, good story and keep on updating it!
RandomReview chapter 3 . 9/27/2007
You turned Tsuruko into Kenshin...

Nice...
avis de rapina chapter 4 . 9/27/2007
Nice to see that you two are back to writi... posting again (I think I read this chappie a while ago on VoidHawk's).

Anywhoo... I hope that you can get back to writing again and I wish your family well in that (and your other) endeavor(s). IIRC you should be starting uni in Tokyo around now. Wherever you are and whatever you're doing, I hope that you continue to enjoy this wonderful obsession we call 'fanfiction.'

Best regards,

Avis

PS - Pls remind AM that I'm still looking forward to reading 'Angel Wings.'
emblasochist chapter 4 . 9/27/2007
I am really lost... I don't even remember who the extras are anymore, even after re-reading this... Sorry, Zeni-chan...
Sailor Enlil chapter 4 . 9/27/2007
Nice to see Tsuruko made it in time.

LOL! When will people learn NEVER to send Ryoga Hibiki on any long range trip?

Keep up the good work!
Darian Bloodhaven chapter 3 . 9/21/2007
Hurry up and Write the fourth chapter, I have been waiting for an extreamly long time, I love the story, so please hurry
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