Reviews for Dancing Machine
Silverthreads chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
Dance is wonderful, but this loss of self made it wonderfully eerie. Great short tale!
Space1Traveler chapter 1 . 5/18/2008
Cool!
Daryl Ann chapter 1 . 5/12/2007
I love your short stories! This was different, and VERY good! I love the title and the line including "of the two-left-foot McKays", heh,heh... mental image of R. as a "Dancin' machine", and the whole group of scientists gettin' down the boogie' whoo-e too funny! And while funny, the insidious machine would have them dance themselves to death. Cool story, thanks. :o)
Korilian chapter 1 . 3/15/2007
That was wonderful! It had this awesome fairy tale feeling (girl in the red dancing shoes ;). Best use of malignent alien tech ever!
Shakia chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
That was really seriously awesome! I really loved how you wrote it, like at first you don't know anything's really wrong and then realize 'oh wait, that's really not good.' Also love how you wrote it fron Rodney's perspecive and how not even until the very end did he realize anything was wrong. :D Very awesome! Any chance of more chapters? It very much made me, with no puns intended, dance! :P
fififolle chapter 1 . 6/28/2006
LOL Dance Junkie! That was fun! Everything dangerous in excess, eh? Nice one. "We want to make it last LONGER," brilliant moment. Thanks!
Hisster chapter 1 . 6/25/2006
That was a wonderful short piece.
spike247uk chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
great premise! Looking forward to reading more of this ;o)
Tazmy chapter 1 . 6/22/2006
that was a fun laugh. And Rodney strapped to a bed is always fun.