|Reviews for Enemy in Blood|
| Prospect chapter 1 . 10/24/2006
This is a favorite story of mine. Excellent Story
| SoulEmbrace2010 chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
Very sweet and cool. This sounds like a diary entry of Kasumi's. Very nice.
| LaniZion chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
Well, am I glad that I had the opportunity to actually run through this. I'm glad I could help you with your edits, so I should be the one thanking you for presenting something as nice as this.
The perspective of who I assume to be Kasumi, and her thoughts are really powerful; it's as if you could really feel what she's going through as she comments on Ayane. Really strong emotion here.
'I will not, nor will I ever, kill you.'
I found that to be the most powerful line. Her reluctance, but her will to continue fighting. I like it a lot.
, hope to see further fics from you in the future.